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Saarlink11dReplied to DevilKing666Ch 65 Spoiling Yu Rou- Saarlink1mthCommented
So they broke into groups of 8 but have 10 members in each group???
"Good, now, this is how it will be. It I currently 1700 hrs, and there are 12 hours before we leave at 0500 hrs. Starting now, group 1 will take watch over the entire exterior perimeter of the house for 3 hours till 2000 hrs. Group 2 will also be on standby during this time, while groups 3 and 4 will get some shut eye. When the 3 hours are up, Group 2 will take over group 1's positions before group 1 gets some rest. Remember that before group 1 goes to sleep, they have to wake up all 10 members of group 3 to remain on standby. - Saarlink1mthCommented
The plot holes in this chapter... Why kill an officer for misfiring? Why not kill the next one for trying to kill him? Why make them call him Sir and then tell them not to? How do you load 3 motorcycles and a bunch of other stuff into cars in the time it takes one person to go up and down a set of stairs? They manage all of this in 2 minutes? What route are they taking? This just felt rushed.
Ch 10 Let’s go! - Saarlink1mthCommented
So first an officer mistakes him for a zombie and he kills said officer without a word/thought. Not two minutes later and another one tries to kill him and is praised for it? I...what?
"It's fine. You were prepared for a possible zombie attack and that is good. It is better to take the chance of killing a human, rather than the chance of seeing who it is only tom get bitten. However, next time don't close your eyes when swinging or else you might miss." - Saarlink1mthPosted
The premise for this story is very good. I like the MCs very normal reaction to the cultivation world's oddities. It is easily my favorite part of the story, watching him be a fish out of water in this world. Please update this more! It is easily one of my favorite starts to a novel in the xanxia genre and it has been a shame to see the lack of updates. I know you have other stories you are writing so I can't complain too much. I just hope you can write more for this story when you find the time as it is a joy to read.
