Review Detail of sinfuego in Aura of Magic

A lot of thought has been put into the world and plot. Very detailed, and definitely a lot of love put into the story. Definitely has an intriguing plot, and is definitely entertaining. My one criticism is that the characters are a little flat. They move the plot forward along nicely, but they don't seem to have any will of their own, getting swept up by the plot instead of making choices that will impact the story. Other than that, no complaints. Grammar and writing quality is good. Starts off a little passive, but gets progressively better each chapter. Also has some nice funny moments. Keep writing, you'll definitely get better!