Djamila
Hello, this is author, I will be shamelessly promoting my novel. Here are some clarification and questions about the story: The story will have 4 volumes. The campus life is just an arc from the story. FL is powerful and not a damsel in distress. ML is a handsome powerful CEO, not the abusive type. There will be a lot of face slapping About the number of chapters, I didn't decide yet. Thanks for reading my novel and I hope you will enjoy reading it. I welcome all your comments.
I really regret reading this one so early at the time of release. Man it's such a good one . Beware you're warned of you read the story you wont be able to stop. Thanks man for this awesome work of yours. I love it and I'm damm sure others will too. Just a bit of spelling mistakes but I don't really mind them. (Cuz I have a lot of them in my story too).
Love the story! The concept is really nice and I can’t help but be drawn to this campus love life. When I first read the story, I knew this is gonna be good. I wasn’t wrong! 😁 Ohh I love the MC and my grandpa, are you a tsundere? Hehehe The only thing that you need to pay attention is the grammar (perhaps you’re already tired hearing this) but some of the parts, your grammar really did influence the story. Next is watch for your typo and lastly, do edit the first chapter. The rest of them seems fine but the first chapter is really messy. The text block is really dense. That’s all from me! Good luck, author! Hope your novel grow bigger! 😁
The story, concept and the setting is very intriguing and different from the other romantic books. The character sketch is very well done. Since there are only 10 chapters, there is not much to say. Your work has a good scope and I expect it to be the same throughout. There are some grammatical errors but they do not alter the pace of the story. Looking forward to what happens next in the story. Keep up the good work author
I have read 6 chapters of the 9 chapters posted so far. The story is interesting and deals with college campus. More romance than studies. It is developing well. Stability is good as already 9 chapters have been published. Character design is good. World background is is also good. Writing quality is good. I did notice a few grammatical mistakes, but these did not interfere with the reading of the story. Mistakes do happen and the writer may not be able to see them. I have started to run the draft through a grammar checker before posting it. All the best.