I have read 6 chapters of the 9 chapters posted so far. The story is interesting and deals with college campus. More romance than studies. It is developing well. Stability is good as already 9 chapters have been published. Character design is good. World background is is also good. Writing quality is good. I did notice a few grammatical mistakes, but these did not interfere with the reading of the story. Mistakes do happen and the writer may not be able to see them. I have started to run the draft through a grammar checker before posting it. All the best.
Djamila
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