Review Detail of Kiiara in Campus's Belle

Love the story! The concept is really nice and I can’t help but be drawn to this campus love life. When I first read the story, I knew this is gonna be good. I wasn’t wrong! 😁 Ohh I love the MC and my grandpa, are you a tsundere? Hehehe The only thing that you need to pay attention is the grammar (perhaps you’re already tired hearing this) but some of the parts, your grammar really did influence the story. Next is watch for your typo and lastly, do edit the first chapter. The rest of them seems fine but the first chapter is really messy. The text block is really dense. That’s all from me! Good luck, author! Hope your novel grow bigger! 😁