MisterImmortal
Very few originals are found in webnovel which are based on the Indian culture, And i think this novel is one of the best among them even if the novel isn't progressed much, the starting and world background coupled with characters making the novel very promising. Author please continue this novel okay🙏 since very few Indian culture based novels are this much promising.
What you have so far is absolutely amazing. I cant find any fault besides the names which are hard to remember. THE story is emersive but not in your face that your filled and overwhelmed with to much information. The side charachter loki juno is actually funn and has personality. It's good so far plus it's actually a book I like and don't want to role my eyes at how stupid the plot is. Definitely don't drop this.
A very unique concept instead of usual mc getting killed by a ' truck- kun ' scenario..I'm just fed up of those now...let's talk about this story , the world background and the characterisation of the entities feels new and fresh to me ..so I would recommend any new readers to give it a try as in my opinion you won't reget it.........
Well there aren't enough chapters to actually give constructive criticism but still the story seems interesting and a little new, will give a better review when there are more chapters. One advice though, try to improve character interactions their interactions don't feel that natural yet. For now adding it to my "to read in a month" list