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  • dukroger
    dukroger15h
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    Skagos is an island with volcanoes, it is a territory that can be conquered, it would be an interesting place to develop. volcanic ash along with quicklime and sea water are important for making Roman cement. he can use this to develop roads and buildings, Roman cement is even more durable than modern cement, and develop the burning of clay bricks with cement, they are excellent and can be molded into different shapes and sizes, this will improve construction than pure stone work, which requires experienced masons and is still time-consuming. A tip, use bamboo instead of iron beams, they just need to remove excess moisture and apply an eye like a tang eye or similar to increase their useful life, there is a territory that represents the East, mainly a version of China, so bamboo they must exist and not be difficult to obtain seedlings.

    Ch 27 Chapter 26
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  • dukroger
    dukroger1d
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    Get the master ring in woodworking and shipbuilding.

    Ch 27 Chapter 26
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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
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  • dukroger
    dukroger1d
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    It's sad, but I understand, I've seen betrayal, a relationship lasting almost a decade, and for idiotic reasons and an obvious lack of character, I imagine MC after living hundreds of years with a person and still understanding their reasons for betrayal. The best thing is to open a Harem, as a king this would make sense, Women like the storm are potential partners.

    Ch 96 O Motivo
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  • dukroger
    dukroger1d
    Commented

    the mc has great power, especially in terms of energy, but the body apparently is not that impressive, meaning that the energy cannot be used all of it, it is contained in excess.

    Ch 83 Baldur e os X-men Parte 9
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    Marvel: Baldur Odinson (PT-BR)
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  • dukroger
    dukroger4d
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    Due to Mc's magic, the wolf became stronger than the others, does the same happen to the dragon? Bigger type, better scales, stronger fire, longer lifespan?

    Ch 85 -Chapter 79-
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    Aegon Snow
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  • dukroger
    dukroger4d
    Replied to TempestDrift

    Hmmm...I see...Although a divine or ancestral blessing is not sumple magic, I understand your point of view.

    Ch 1 100%
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    HOTD- Family above All
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  • dukroger
    dukroger4d
    Commented

    Light of Rome, is a song that the MC can adapt at some patriotic moment, there is also the cost of the crown.

    Ch 24 Chapter 23
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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
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  • dukroger
    dukroger5d
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    Ch 21 Changes
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    HOTD- Family above All
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    dukroger5d
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    Ch 21 Changes
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    HOTD- Family above All
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  • dukroger
    dukroger5d
    Commented

    I recommend more depth, sometimes things are a little quick, besides, it would be cool to show the impact of the MC's actions, for commoners and nobles, a balance between the micro and the macro would be ideal for a better view of the world and those who live in it. there.

    Ch 20 Quick vote
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    HOTD- Family above All
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  • dukroger
    dukroger5d
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    Engineering, blacksmithing, master builders, carpentry, pharmacy, herbology, alchemy, glassmaking, medicine, professional animal husbandry, training, navigation, cartography, are rings that contain these things that must be prioritized for their subjects involved in the civil side. in the military I recommend strategy, archery, riding, navigation, fencing, spears, knives and other use of bladed weapons, unarmed fighting styles, concealment techniques, survival techniques in jungles and other hostile environments, first aid and knowledge in the area, improved So for survival, all the rings in these areas are perfect for the military of their countries.

    Ch 22 Chapter 21
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  • dukroger
    dukroger6d
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    Some basic knowledge, how to use clay to make burnt bricks, Roman cement, volcanic gray quicklime and sea water, fertilizers, mix manure, warm water, gray plants, milk and molasses or something sweet equivalent, if you can get potassium and borax it would be great, mix everything and let it ferment, and stir every day, in a few months you will have an excellent liquid fertilizer, you can also try decomposition processes by box, extracting animal or vegetable oil to make soap, these are all simple things that the mc can try to use in the future , simple but highly effective things, perhaps a blessing from the Goddess Athena, for him to receive a chance to study knowledge of his old world during his dreams, he does not need to become a genius or take this world to the industrial era, but to many things that Construction, agriculture, chemistry, pharmaceuticals and other things can be made, with exclusive materials from this world it can even create new things.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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  • dukroger
    dukroger7d
    Commented

    In a world with Gods, the mc can say he is blessed by God or his ancestors, or even say that it is a magic awakened due to his noble blood, this is one of the cases in which a system with group benefits is justified.

    Ch 1 100%
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    HOTD- Family above All
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  • dukroger
    dukroger11d
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    The author is a beginner, but even so the story has maintained a balance, the author himself said that he doesn't have much knowledge of the books and TV series, but he decided to venture out, so small errors or things different from the originals can happen, but nothing that spoils the story or cannot be edited later. I liked that the golden finger wasn't something exaggerated, I hope he continues the good work, I wish him and all of us blessings.

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  • dukroger
    dukroger11d
    Commented

    the price of the crown, it's a good theme song for your story, I recommend keeping this style, songs that are too modern may not be very good for this world and time.

    Ch 8 Chapter 7
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  • dukroger
    dukroger15d
    Replied to Mytici

    In fact, I noticed it only after the translator put it in the footer of the index.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Spells
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
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  • dukroger
    dukroger16d
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    Very well, the story is developing slowly, the characters are reasonably realistic, the interaction between the world, the MC and other people is ok. Keep developing like this, slowly and steadily, the golden fingers of the story are already exaggerated, so for the story not to lose its excitement, care must be taken. I know it's a dangerous world, but that's what captivates readers, the adventure, the effort, personal overcoming, growth and maturity, both of the mc and the other characters.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Spells
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    DC: Dimensional Luck
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  • dukroger
    dukroger17d
    Commented

    007

    Ch 44 Chapter 44 Nick Fury
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  • dukroger
    dukroger17d
    Replied to Marcia_05

    You can make an MC who gains a Dimensional seed, the space starts the size of an island, it will have portals to access other worlds, and through research and study, and obtain materials from these worlds, the rarer the better, this dimension will grow, and be able to reproduce these materials over time, even living beings. The mc's power could be the ability to receive part of the characteristics of the races that the dimension is capable of creating over time, of course he would have to work hard in research and training to control and strengthen himself, but it would be an interesting story. The main world where the mc would appear, you can make an original world, like medieval fantasy, with magic and other powers, and your mc would have to over time establish a domain and territory, high-tech things or magic from different worlds could work bad due to conflicts between world rules, but they could serve as inspiration for the MC to create compatible versions in their territory. So we would have a story of building a kingdom and at the same time visiting other worlds, without one thing getting in the way of the other, and the particular dimension could become a home for beings who are refugees from other worlds and a place of protection and hope, a type of sanctuary. .

    Ch 42 Chapter forty-two: High Council.
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  • dukroger
    dukroger17d
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    The story has potential, but the author has to be careful, many stories end up getting boring because Mc manages everything, without much effort and too quickly. I recommend developing things in a way that he has to train control, be it items or skills, group chat is a cool idea, but the roulette wheel must suffer serious limitations, like power of quantities limited to a certain amount at each level , for example SSS only 3, SS 4,S 10, A 100, B 200, C 1.000, D 10.000, E 1.000,000.After finishing this, this system would disappear and the mc would have to fend for himself.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Gacha
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