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  • Wallker
    Wallker5mth
    Commented

    A entire chapter of talking, consider me impressed. This is one of the many things that hold eastern novels back from being great.

    Ch 24 Blood Race!
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    Heavenly World of Killing: I Can Extract Everything!
    Fantasy · OmniPrime
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  • Wallker
    Wallker6mth
    Commented

    It seems you got chp 22 and 21 mixed up, you should swap them and fix that.

    Ch 22 An Ambush of Horrific Proportions
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    Damien Nightshade The Villainous Vampire
    Fantasy · XKARNATION
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  • Wallker
    Wallker6mth
    Replied to DaoistBsBz8Q

    You also need to work on your grammar if you really think there are no errors...

    Ch 167 Union Head
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    The Ruined Death Knight
    Fantasy · Allenheim
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  • Wallker
    Wallker8mth
    Replied to MattHarris

    You have the tag "thestringactingweak", but the tag you should have is masochist.

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    The Wretched: Ascent of An Anti-Hero
    Fantasy · MattHarris
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  • Wallker
    Wallker8mth
    Replied to Lord_Bell

    Oh, one last thing, you didn't mention it happened to the mc, that's kind of a big deal.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
    Movies · Lord_Bell
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  • Wallker
    Wallker8mth
    Replied to Lord_Bell

    I didn't even register there were 4 stars there until you told me and I went back to look.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
    Movies · Lord_Bell
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  • Wallker
    Wallker8mth
    Replied to Lord_Bell

    You're right I should of somehow known what the four stars were...

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
    Movies · Lord_Bell
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  • Wallker
    Wallker8mth
    Commented

    Wish you would of told us what the trigger warning is about so we don't have to read to find out what your definition is. Not sure what the appeal is to doing that to your mc...

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Marvel: Darkclaw Origins
    Movies · Lord_Bell
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Commented

    I liked it when he finished his revenge and cut all ties. This chap ruins that... I guess I should have been prepared for this though based on the title.

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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Commented

    You need to stop changing pov's so often and retelling the same thing you've already done, there are better ways to do it... Whelp, good luck.

    Ch 14 The pang of guilt
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    The World Conqueror Arises In a New World
    Fantasy · PKTM
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Replied to Kido_TO

    That's not true, plot armor refers to things that make no sense in the scope of what is happening, like things that come out of the blue, out of no where to save the mc... It's not plot armor if it is built up and falls in line with the story.

    Ch 144 Defeating Death!
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    Consuming Earths, Devouring Skies
    Eastern Fantasy · KevinAscending
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Replied to Absolute_Author

    Maybe, but what about the pain power? I thought he feels no pain and can even send it back or something?

    Ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
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    The Fated Omega One
    Fantasy · Absolute_Author
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Posted

    This is worst than garbage and should be deleted.......................................................................................................

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    The Unparalleled Doctor
    Magical Realism · Suthor
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Commented

    Another copycat, let's see how far you make it, and please tell me why you all do the stomach of cronos, who even likes reading that part.

    Ch 1 The Void
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    King of The Dead
    Anime & Comics · Alucard_Vampyre
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Replied to Absolute_Author

    Well you make your mc seem like an alpha but then you give him beta moments, also his powers for some reason don't always work for whatever reason I may or may not have missed. And I personally don't like when obvious threats are ignored and then the mc gets beat by someone as if surprised, when he should have known the entire time.

    Ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
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    The Fated Omega One
    Fantasy · Absolute_Author
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Replied to Mel_Aniv

    So he's going to teach bandits how to get stronger so they can hurt innocent people better?

    Ch 5 Farming Village
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    Grandmaster Of All Job Class
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Commented

    Are you serious, no wonder this never became popular... Whelp good luck, I'd put a review but I bet it'll just get deleted.

    Ch 25 Red Snow - Sunstone - Breakthrough - Cedric's Greed
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    The Fated Omega One
    Fantasy · Absolute_Author
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  • Wallker
    Wallker9mth
    Commented

    So far the MC has been very disappointing, to put it mildly.

    Ch 20 Eventful Morning - Unreasonable Jealousy - Affection - Intervention - Portal to the Spirit Mines
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    The Fated Omega One
    Fantasy · Absolute_Author
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  • Wallker
    Wallker10mth
    Replied to Pool_Swimmer

    I can't believe I missed this review, wish I saw it earlier.

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    Last Paladin
    Fantasy · ShadowFoxx89
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  • Wallker
    Wallker10mth
    Replied to Ailzonius

    It seems you missed a big portion of what I wrote or choose to ignore it, either way it's fine just write however you want don't worry about me. Not like I said anything all that negative anyways, don't let me stop you from writing about kids if that's what you want, it's just not for me.

    Ch 6 Seeking Job
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    In Game of Thrones / ASOIAF World With A Bow
    TV · Ailzonius
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