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I liked it when he finished his revenge and cut all ties. This chap ruins that... I guess I should have been prepared for this though based on the title.
Well you make your mc seem like an alpha but then you give him beta moments, also his powers for some reason don't always work for whatever reason I may or may not have missed. And I personally don't like when obvious threats are ignored and then the mc gets beat by someone as if surprised, when he should have known the entire time.
It seems you missed a big portion of what I wrote or choose to ignore it, either way it's fine just write however you want don't worry about me. Not like I said anything all that negative anyways, don't let me stop you from writing about kids if that's what you want, it's just not for me.