Reviews of Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]

This story have 2 girls that manipulate MC in the name of helping him, they have *** and litteraly get cummed on and swallow his enemies cum with vivid details while MC knows nothing about it, then they **** his own knights and let his maid get fuked by a random scout All while mc is oblivious and they dont allow him to have *** with other women..they also dont have *** with mc just kiss him...this is a cuck story with heavy details of *** with how good they feel from other men.. worse then NTR story for me

Wow, a sexual story with women that are actual characters with actual aims, were side characters can have sex as well, were every character is fleshed out and not just a paper stand in, an actual plot. 10/5 stars!

The relationship between Agist and Lillica is extraordinary they feel like actual people not like other stories were they feel robotic or monotone prettey nice 10/10

It is a mysterious and has the wildest imagination on can get while reading so keep up with the crazy creativeness good work grammar is basically excellent

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Wow! I thought science fiction was your best, but frankly this one feels even better to me! It might because this is your second one, but the story flows much better from the start! That and how you described the "feeding", I'm hooked!

This is just confusing. The worlds given no background other than the demon women wanting him because he is about to break. They do the enemies and his knights with the Mc not seeming to know what its going on when it is pretty obvious. It feels like its more about the demon women than this count.

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To begin this review, I'll talk about my experience while reading this rather giving any spoilers regarding plotline. Firstly what it is all about? It's stated in the title that the story deals with realistic elements of a man/woman. Moreover, the 'limits and desires' of a human are predicted through the characterization of the MC. Such theme combined with other realistic elements infused with fantasy is a rare combination and a bold step to walk out of the lane of cultivation and CEO stories. It's a hook if you want to read something by using your brain and the power of analysing, although the plotline has been clearly stated as mature content it has justifications for the characters to behave weird or impulsive or just on the basis of desires. It intrigued me because of the opening chapter which reminded me of 'Macbeth' of Shakespeare, which slightly resembled the meeting of the Count with the demoness, who tried to lure him to listen to his own demons and the desire to rule with authority. The philosophical and psychological aspects which author has tried to showcase deserves to be read with thorough interest, indeed it's fun yet weird to read a few scenarios, which is solely the author's wonderful and unique imaginative power. Dear author, you've captured 'me' with this unique blend of elements (XD) Will continue further, soon.

Shameless self review. This is my second book. Yes, this one is for WC #89, my first attempt at Fantasy Romance and R-18+. It won't be nearly as long as my first book, The Alterra Project, but it should still be at least full novel length. We'll just have to see how I feel about it after the first (and only) major arc is complete.

I was wondering if you dropped the book. I thought it was a pretty interesting book. Thanks for the chairs you did give us

The writing quality of this novel is good. Short chaps. The way characters are showed to you feels real although there's one big flaw on it, and it's that you start to empathize with the MC since the fist chap. Why this is a flaw? well the female lead is a succubus like her sister, so yup. It left a bad taste in the mouth reading their scenes and how they act, yes is foolish for my part to feel like that after reading the story but when you are reading it, your expectations are clears from the start, you want the MC to have said scenes with those females, not others. So, taking aside that that part that really could just turn off from reading this whole novel, the actual phase of the novel was doing pretty good, although it could have a better world building. All in all, it had a great potential for me, but knowing most likely how the females would act and keep doing those shits, I decided to drop this novel. I wouldn't feel satisfied even if the story improves afterwards due to this. For those who can bear it, I guess you would enjoy.

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So far from reading this book, my impression is very good. Not your average mature novel where the male is the hornet beast. The story flows naturally and does not read forced.

Great story thus far with the story developing well and at a nice pace. With the 18+ not overwhelming the storyline and also still blending in. The 18+ chapters are both well written and steamy.

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Great addition to the Halloween contest, looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Author does a good job of pulling you in from the start.