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Review Detail of Xerstoren in Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]

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Xerstoren
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The writing quality of this novel is good. Short chaps. The way characters are showed to you feels real although there's one big flaw on it, and it's that you start to empathize with the MC since the fist chap. Why this is a flaw? well the female lead is a succubus like her sister, so yup. It left a bad taste in the mouth reading their scenes and how they act, yes is foolish for my part to feel like that after reading the story but when you are reading it, your expectations are clears from the start, you want the MC to have said scenes with those females, not others. So, taking aside that that part that really could just turn off from reading this whole novel, the actual phase of the novel was doing pretty good, although it could have a better world building. All in all, it had a great potential for me, but knowing most likely how the females would act and keep doing those shits, I decided to drop this novel. I wouldn't feel satisfied even if the story improves afterwards due to this. For those who can bear it, I guess you would enjoy.

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Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]

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