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A well crafted crime romance amalgamation. I'm still in awe the way every scene is so easy to visualise whole scene of the room test. Moving on to the fist fight of chief and Jack, the leaps and punches were effortlessly playing in my head. The disguise of other folks, the tension in atmosphere, the whole scenario of Sarah- Jack meet up is amazing! Just waiting when he will actually step inside the house, after tackling all the goons and assassins.
There are just lots of flashbacks indicated to explain such things
Yup yup, you're right
Better give catchy titles to the chapters.
The professor from earlier chapters
Yikes! So it's like he has lived a loop of same stuff?
I'd have been scared as shiz!
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Oh my! π³
Current version is edited, personally by me.
To long again, even longer sentences. It looks hella weird on phone even though i'm currently o pc but the outlook is unpleasant.
Too long paragraph, which can be split into 3
Good, Good!