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Aysel_Inara

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鈼廎emme Fatale: The Queen Of Chess 鈼廇bducting The Mafia Romance Author (Goodnovel.com)

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara9h
    Commented

    Reading the chapters upto 3rd, I'd suggest you to change the synopsis it's totally bland and doesn't support the wonderful story inside. Plus, a change of cover too.

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    Aysel_Inara19h
    Replied to Purplebutterfly

    Yeah, in 1st chapter it is there but then it disappears .So, I'm right.馃槻

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    Aysel_Inara1d
    Replied to Mana_efehiz

    Oh, makes sense of that.馃槻 Good luck with the adventure and journey on WN. (And oh, with the contest too)

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara1d
    Commented

    Wait, she had the system (chuchu) before she transmigrated? Or am I confused?

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    Aysel_Inara1d
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    I think it's just me who's confused what's happening since there are too less dialogues to support the scenes .馃槵

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara1d
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    I've a lot of things to say, starting with the storyline which is pretty mgch realistic you can hear the characters speaking in your head because they're quite close to real people. The world building is supported through dialogues and the flow of scenarios which shift from on room to another. The MC is your strong girl born to conquer ,the story begins in her childhood and appears to be a perfect life (as per where title comes from) which undergoes a series of ups and downs as she grows up. Though I still have questions about the mother (whom Jennie calls aunt) is thx mother hiding from the father of the kid? The mystery still remains there in first few chapters. The flow is quite smooth and without mistakes but I gotta say there was not a single cliffhanger in first 5 chapters to keep the reader hooked (Which is a necessary thing to place in first 3 chapters to force reader to turn the page) Nonetheless ,I like realistic elements and this ebook had tons of them. Although I'm glad the names weren't that much confusing. (having hard time to remember who was who usually) lol. In a nut shell, I wish luck and lots of love to the author for creating a blunderous- free narration with a smooth flow.

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    Aysel_Inara1d
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    Hold on*

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara1d
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    To begin with the review I'll quote the storyline first, which appears to be a horror plotline but then you realize it is a system story with a responsible MC and has a fantasy tinge draped to make it even more interesting. Taking about the narration style and quality, I must say it is absolutely flawless. (You gotta believe my words) And considering the title of the book I can somewhat predict the story but I gotta accept that didn't expect the realistic world building. It deviates from traditional system novels in this aspect.

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara2d
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    Whaaaa-

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara2d
    Replied to Serial_seresposa

    Thank you for the kind words and (gets shy) the praising tone.

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    Aysel_Inara4d
    Replied to Bao_Karen

    Thank you~

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