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Aysel_Inara

Lv4

𝐡𝑒 π‘“π‘’π‘Žπ‘Ÿπ‘™π‘’π‘ π‘  𝑖𝑛 π‘‘β„Žπ‘’ π‘π‘’π‘Ÿπ‘ π‘’π‘–π‘‘ π‘œπ‘“ π‘€β„Žπ‘Žπ‘‘ 𝑠𝑒𝑑𝑠 π‘¦π‘œπ‘’π‘Ÿ π‘ π‘œπ‘’π‘™ π‘œπ‘› π‘“π‘–π‘Ÿπ‘’ (ΰΈ‡'Μ€-'́)ΰΈ‡

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara28d
    Posted

    A review by Aysel here, you know what it means ;) I won't say much because I personally know the author and her writing. Just give it a go and you won't regret it. β€πŸ™Œ

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    Alpha's Mismatched Mate
    Fantasy Β· Hira_Shoukat
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara2mth
    Replied to Haitian_Cheri

    There are just lots of flashbacks indicated to explain such things

    "But if you follow my orders then you may survive later, If not then you will have a future, more terrible comparatively death because Ronan Ross would never forgive you at any cost. Only your life would satiate his revenge for kissing his wife."
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    Femme Fatale:The Queen Of Chess
    Contemporary Romance Β· Aysel_Inara
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara3mth
    Replied to NotBeatrix

    Yup yup, you're right

    Chapter 1
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara3mth
    Commented

    The chapter length feels 500 words, please extend it to standard 1k words at least.

    Ch 1 Chapter: 2
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara3mth
    Commented

    Better give catchy titles to the chapters.

    Chapter 1
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara4mth
    Replied to Night_Crawler619

    The professor from earlier chapters

    'The chaos element for humans,' Lieutenant Dyester thought while resuming his position on the table. 'He needs an excellent martial art to compensate for this weakness. I wonder if the higher-ups still remember their debt.'
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    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasy Β· Eveofchaos
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara5mth
    Commented

    I'd start reading author notes first before reading chapter xDD

    Ch 6 Bounded
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    Young Master in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy Β· Avan
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara5mth
    Commented

    Yikes! So it's like he has lived a loop of same stuff?

    Everything was, action for action, the same as his dream, mere hours before that baneful monstrosity's attack claimed their lives. On the other hand, though, he had enjoyed similar activities daily in the last two years, so it was hard to be sure which was true and which was false.
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    Young Master in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy Β· Avan
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara5mth
    Commented

    I'd have been scared as shiz!

    Surprised, Viktor turned around on instinct to see who said it, only to discover that there was no one else with him.
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    Young Master in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy Β· Avan
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara5mth
    Commented

    0.0

    "Blyat!!" A loud curse resounded through the air, startling those nearby.
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    Young Master in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy Β· Avan
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara5mth
    Commented

    Oh my! 😳

    "Devil? How could it be? How could a devil reside inside a human body?" The Great Emperor's eyes were wide open as he spoke.
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    Sword Devil Also Dual Cultivates?
    Eastern Fantasy Β· Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Posted

    Just friggin read it! I love it and I was a super good experience to read such a refreshing story πŸ˜Œβ€πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜›πŸ˜œ the author knows what she's doing and she's good at it!

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    Love at First Night
    Contemporary Romance Β· _Elle
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Replied to yasaa

    Current version is edited, personally by me.

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    Sold To An Alpha
    Fantasy Romance Β· AngelLily
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    To long again, even longer sentences. It looks hella weird on phone even though i'm currently o pc but the outlook is unpleasant.

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    Too long paragraph, which can be split into 3

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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    Good, Good!

    "Girls aren't nice here. If they see you weak they will destroy you. You have to get stronger and a thicker skin so that nobody will take advantage of you." He explained.
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    Fantasy Romance Β· Elle_Lynn
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    Bruh! She is a hooman, can't eat raw stuff

    Ch 3 Why did you choose me?
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    YES, ANSWER US

    "Why did you choose me if we barely know each other?" Her voice peaked while goosebumps formed on her arms as Derrick's crimson red eyes lit up hearing her question.
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    OwO super fast, super good!

    Grace widened her eyes, she turned her head to the side but accidentally for the rush of the moment she turned to the same side of Derrick, and now their lips were only a few inches apart. She held her breath for the extremely closeness and another thrill ran through her spine.
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    Lethal Love - Seduced By The Alpha
    Fantasy Romance Β· Elle_Lynn
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  • Aysel_Inara
    Aysel_Inara7mth
    Commented

    IKR! Pls hug me too!

    Derrick cupped Grace's chin, his warm touch on her chin sent her shivers all over her back, she involuntary lifted her gaze to meet his, and when he hinted a smile she blushed. How could a werewolf be so handsome and look so kind when he was described as the worst creature in the entire world?
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    Lethal Love - Seduced By The Alpha
    Fantasy Romance Β· Elle_Lynn
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