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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover3mth
    Commented

    this story is awesome!!!!!!

    Ch 39 Transfiguration Class! Part-2
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    Harry Potter: Ero World
    Book&Literature · light_novel_addict
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover3mth
    Commented

    Simon?

    Out of the fourteen Battle Master class bandit heads, Simon had already killed half of them out. What's more all of them were either Six Star Battle Master or Seven, they provided ample experience for his growth.
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    The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect
    Eastern · ViciousPepper
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover3mth
    Commented

    it seems there's a typo in this paragraph

    "Well, I know what to do," Reaves concluded, his decision crystallizing in the recesses of his thoughts. "I will keep watching t Selina's eyes flared with anger at the woman's audacious remark. he Russell family for now before choosing whether to draw them in or alienate them." His gaze lingered on the now-empty doorway, the weight of uncertainty settling over the lavish hall.
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    Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic
    Fantasy · Taosnothing
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover4mth
    Commented

    before it was 2 minutes right ?

    Bruce checked his watch. Ten more minutes.
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    Batman x Arc Reactor
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover5mth
    Commented

    more chapters please

    Ch 165 Chapter 165- Who Are You? (3)
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    The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect
    Eastern · ViciousPepper
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover5mth
    Commented

    first of all,I'm no expert.this is just my opinion as a reader.author you are doing a good job writing the scene.but you are dragging this scene across multiple chapters.your description of the situation paints a vivid picture.but i think you should add some sounds as well.like moaning sounds or something.because after a while just readers will lose interest in it.

    Ch 214 Chapter 214 I'm gunna cum
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    Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic
    Fantasy · Taosnothing
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover6mth
    Commented

    can you add more details in the character list?atleast add affiliations. It's hard to keep track.and maybe something like a relationship status at least?ex. lover, friend, enemy, etc.

    Ch -1 Character list and power levels
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    Strongest Mage with the Lust system
    Fantasy · Blizzard54k
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover7mth
    Commented

    if this is the way the story will keep going, then the author should put the ntr tag.

    Ch 128 Chapter 128 Play Tricks
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    Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic
    Fantasy · Taosnothing
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover7mth
    Commented

    where's the MC?

    Ch 127 Chapter 127 Abuse
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    Lord Of Succubi:Transmigrated As A Dual Cultivator In Isekai Of Magic
    Fantasy · Taosnothing
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover7mth
    Commented

    please pay more attention to the punctuation marks. if you don't then Readers might lose interest even if the story is good.

    Ch 1 Ch. 1
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    Black clover: a king's creation of dominance
    Anime & Comics · The_real_MC_
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover7mth
    Commented
    Ch 133 Chapter 133- Finally I’m out!!
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    The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect
    Eastern · ViciousPepper
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover7mth
    Commented
    Ch 12 11. Initiating The Plan Of Escape
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    Marvel: I Need A New Body
    Anime & Comics · Marveller
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover8mth
    Commented

    An I mistaken or did he just give away his real name?i thought he said his name was yang yan or something to keep his identity secret.

    Ch 126 Chapter 126- Annoying the heck out of his opponent
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    The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect
    Eastern · ViciousPepper
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover8mth
    Commented

    Author, can you add an auxiliary chapter with power levels

    Ch 18 Lu Ying
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    Level Up in Martial World
    Eastern · Aurelius_Imperator
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover8mth
    Commented

    just to confirm...no one from zhang clan has seen mc's when he posed as an alchemist right??otherwise wouldn't they recognize him after he suddenly left from there

    Ch 97 Chapter 97- A Deal
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    The Greatest Disciple of the Evil Sect
    Eastern · ViciousPepper
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover9mth
    Commented

    More chapters please

    Ch 13 The Truth Is Out There
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    A New Life In The Arrowverse
    TV · Ezzy_E
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover9mth
    Commented

    take your time author...and I'm sorry for your loss

    Ch 18 Not a chapter.
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    The Flash: Godspeed
    TV · UchihaIzuna
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover9mth
    Commented

    more frequent chapters please

    Ch 12 National City We've Arrived!
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    A New Life In The Arrowverse
    TV · Ezzy_E
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover10mth
    Commented

    more chapters please..... i've been waiting for a good TODAG fanfic for a long time.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Tales of Demons and Gods : Path of survival
    Book&Literature · Eggcellent
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  • Kpnovellover
    Kpnovellover10mth
    Commented
    Ch 6 Crimson-Haired Girl
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    Demon Slayer : Becoming A Demon From The Start
    Anime & Comics · Reddust
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