Review Detail of Weezyf in Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]
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This story have 2 girls that manipulate MC in the name of helping him, they have *** and litteraly get cummed on and swallow his enemies cum with vivid details while MC knows nothing about it, then they **** his own knights and let his maid get fuked by a random scout All while mc is oblivious and they dont allow him to have *** with other women..they also dont have *** with mc just kiss him...this is a cuck story with heavy details of *** with how good they feel from other men.. worse then NTR story for me
Lust, Power, & Desire [R-18+]
LordSputnik
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Thanks for the review! I appreciate all feedback especially negative feedback as that is what really helps me improve. The maid doesn't get ****ed by a random scout, she is given a nightmare that brings her a lot of pain which he uses to feed off of. Lorraina feels guilty about this and in turn gives her a VERY good dream.
No problem! Oh yes i forgot it wasnt *** with the maid, it was torture and then pleasure against her will. im sad that you dont reply if you agree with my review or not and the reason why you wrote so many *** scenes of lil and lorraine , If you just put cuck tag then we can avoid this type of sht
LordSputnik:Thanks for the review! I appreciate all feedback especially negative feedback as that is what really helps me improve. The maid doesn't get ****ed by a random scout, she is given a nightmare that brings her a lot of pain which he uses to feed off of. Lorraina feels guilty about this and in turn gives her a VERY good dream.
I'm not going to put cuck tag because I don't agree that it is cuck. Yes, it was torture, but I don't consider it pleasure against her will as we rarely have control over our own dreams. Plus, she has genuine feelings for Count Agist. Lorraina has the most scenes at 4, Lillica only has 2 and a half (although one more now with chapter 45) , Isadora has 2, and Sylvia and Alice share one. I say half a scene for Lillica because that scene in the barn was hardly worthy of it. I try to spread them out, but obviously Lillica is the primary female lead where as the others support the story. My plan is for every character to have at least one and to not just have *** scenes just to have *** scenes. I personally don't like the ones where it's only the male lead that gets all of the action so I try and spread it out.
Weezyf:No problem! Oh yes i forgot it wasnt *** with the maid, it was torture and then pleasure against her will. im sad that you dont reply if you agree with my review or not and the reason why you wrote so many *** scenes of lil and lorraine , If you just put cuck tag then we can avoid this type of sht
LordSputnik:I'm not going to put cuck tag because I don't agree that it is cuck. Yes, it was torture, but I don't consider it pleasure against her will as we rarely have control over our own dreams. Plus, she has genuine feelings for Count Agist. Lorraina has the most scenes at 4, Lillica only has 2 and a half (although one more now with chapter 45) , Isadora has 2, and Sylvia and Alice share one. I say half a scene for Lillica because that scene in the barn was hardly worthy of it. I try to spread them out, but obviously Lillica is the primary female lead where as the others support the story. My plan is for every character to have at least one and to not just have *** scenes just to have *** scenes. I personally don't like the ones where it's only the male lead that gets all of the action so I try and spread it out.
Nobody cheats as of yet. I doubt that will happen, but if I feel it fits the story in some way then it could happen.
Book_seeker:does his partners cheat on him?