Reviews of Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(Closed))

This Story has me interested after i read the Titel. I find Library of Heavens Path LoHP absolute OP and was interested was the Author was making of this. The first and secon chapter was interesting but after it is gooing down really fast. The writing Quality is average 3 Stars Stability of Updates 3 Stars: Not enough chapters to really give a good answer normaly i would only give 1-2max. Down to fast. Story Development: 1Star then you have no Story, more of a rectical from his Achivment and what he was making. It was to fast and it was not logical Character: 1 Star What Design? World background: 2 Star For minimal Try The LoHP is OP but what you have writen is not posible. The Ability from LoHP is. 1: Scan Books 2. Find Flaws in all Books and what you scan 3. Absorbtion from knowlege with Golden Page 4. Make a better Version or/and flawless Technic, knowlege. But it can't make new knowlege that was never introduced. You have no knowlege what was posible with Technology to the Time from 1985-1990. That is the Timeframe from your story i was really hopefull but this sorry The LoHP is not Omniscient it know only so much how you

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One of the most well written stories I’ve read on this site and also very enjoyable I think the story won’t be action atleast since mc seems to be the leader of everything but let’s see what Author has in mind first The only complaint I’d have with the story is the low ammount of character progression and how everything seems to go mc way, should’ve added some politics considering the scale of the things he’s done, perhaps some action with an assassination here and there since it’s not probable for mc not to meet any resistance at all Keep up the good work and I hope you don’t drop

This "author" is able to write in the style of "I went there and did it". This is where the abilities of the "author" end. This is not fan fiction or a FAIRY TALE - this is a banal draft. I was sorry to waste time on this, so catch 1 *

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The mc remakes the world pretty much. This writing is a waiste of time. There is no story just about changes mc does to the world. Very minor interaction with potter world people besides goblins. He pretty much takes all his future knowledge of muggle companies and buys them then upgrades tech then does the same in the magical world.

I like this story it just goes to fvcking fast..................................................................................................................................................

man this is a good fast paced book you could have done more or add more to the book it would be a great book well anyway nice going good job author 👍👍👍👍

absolutely condensed read but a fun no brainer read too.

suuper interesring, is a regret finish so fast all things ^^~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ sssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssss

pretty much perfect, only downside is the fast pace at the end, but i understand why it is nessecery.

La verdad es una inspiración si voy a hacer un fanfic la verdad es que me gustó por la imaginación del autor espero que alguien tomé lo que hiciste de este fanfic y lo mejore o algo par leer 😎😁

Has a good storyline but found to be a little choppy. The grammar needs a little work but over all easy to follow. Seemed a little rushed near the end but still open ended for a continuation.

Library of Heaven's path is such a cool power. Unfortunately, before you enjoy it, you'll have to read through three unbearable chapters of Harry getting his inheritance at Gringotts. It was terrible. I can't even get past the third chapter. Just nonstop Lordship ex Machina.

,прикольно надеюсь автор не умер история крутая но конец плохой слишком быстрый Бббббббббббббббббббббббддддддддддддллллллллллллллллбдддддддддддддддддддддддддд

bloody briliant. wish someone can do such positive reformation for our world also.,...........................................................

I loved this story.I hope that the author has survived depression and stayed alive because of it would be a real waste of a very talented human being to Death too soon.

at first it seems like it's going to be a great story. we have the protagonist, he wakes up and we follow what he's doing. later on in the story it becomes akin to that of an itemized list. informative, yes. fun to read, not realy. over all if these 12 chapters were expanded to 50 chapters with the same plot points and more descriptive narration, then it would be a decent start.

Love it

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