Review Detail of TobascoDragoon in Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(Closed))

at first it seems like it's going to be a great story. we have the protagonist, he wakes up and we follow what he's doing. later on in the story it becomes akin to that of an itemized list. informative, yes. fun to read, not realy. over all if these 12 chapters were expanded to 50 chapters with the same plot points and more descriptive narration, then it would be a decent start.