Review Detail of Skepparn in Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(Closed))
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One of the most well written stories I’ve read on this site and also very enjoyable I think the story won’t be action atleast since mc seems to be the leader of everything but let’s see what Author has in mind first The only complaint I’d have with the story is the low ammount of character progression and how everything seems to go mc way, should’ve added some politics considering the scale of the things he’s done, perhaps some action with an assassination here and there since it’s not probable for mc not to meet any resistance at all Keep up the good work and I hope you don’t drop
Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(Closed))
Chroniclemale
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I am kind of a ******* writer so i am still learning how to write and about the politics you should know that tracking a person in the magical world is very hard if you haven't seen them and even if someone tried to put on a tracking charm on Harold it would be detected by him instantly. It is also the fact that the potter manor is unplottable, currently not connected to the floo network and only accessible by his ring portkey but also that no one knows it is Harry potter who is doing these things so there is suspicion. The topic of resistance for inventions is less due to the fact that Harold registered his inventions through the ICW and not the british ministry thus the patent is untouchable in the eyes of the ministry. This allowed him to have easier time in establoshing his shop and the fact that he was throwing money left and right in the face of people made it even more easier.
I am kind of a ******* writer so i am still learning how to write and about the politics you should know that tracking a person in the magical world is very hard if you haven't seen them and even if someone tried to put on a tracking charm on Harold it would be detected by him instantly. It is also the fact that the potter manor is unplottable, currently not connected to the floo network and only accessible by his ring portkey but also that no one knows it is Harry potter who is doing these things so there is suspicion. The topic of resistance for inventions is less due to the fact that Harold registered his inventions through the ICW and not the british ministry thus the patent is untouchable in the eyes of the ministry. This allowed him to have easier time in establoshing his shop and the fact that he was throwing money left and right in the face of people made it even more easier.
Chroniclemale:I am kind of a ******* writer so i am still learning how to write and about the politics you should know that tracking a person in the magical world is very hard if you haven't seen them and even if someone tried to put on a tracking charm on Harold it would be detected by him instantly. It is also the fact that the potter manor is unplottable, currently not connected to the floo network and only accessible by his ring portkey but also that no one knows it is Harry potter who is doing these things so there is suspicion. The topic of resistance for inventions is less due to the fact that Harold registered his inventions through the ICW and not the british ministry thus the patent is untouchable in the eyes of the ministry. This allowed him to have easier time in establoshing his shop and the fact that he was throwing money left and right in the face of people made it even more easier.
Chroniclemale:I am kind of a ******* writer so i am still learning how to write and about the politics you should know that tracking a person in the magical world is very hard if you haven't seen them and even if someone tried to put on a tracking charm on Harold it would be detected by him instantly. It is also the fact that the potter manor is unplottable, currently not connected to the floo network and only accessible by his ring portkey but also that no one knows it is Harry potter who is doing these things so there is suspicion. The topic of resistance for inventions is less due to the fact that Harold registered his inventions through the ICW and not the british ministry thus the patent is untouchable in the eyes of the ministry. This allowed him to have easier time in establoshing his shop and the fact that he was throwing money left and right in the face of people made it even more easier.