the mc is a wuss and annoying. the mc takes any enjoyment you might get from the story away. he or she, I have no idea really, it says he and people treat it like he, but he she is used a lot, and it says female lead, but who knows. if it's a female, the author is terrible at writing females. the mc constantly whines the whole time, it groups with a complete stranger that dies and it cries like the person was a relative, being it has already been through dungeons for 3 yrs in thevold life death should not affect it so much. the mc trained for 3 years for the dungeons but is still weak, so I have no idea there. honestly, if the mc is female, I will head out. The only reason I stuck around was because I thought the mc was male and just a puss, and I guessed the he/she stuff was just a translation issue. I am at around 30, and really, if the mc hasn't improved by knowing it has pre knowledge, I don't see any hope for the story. I wouldn't even rate it for bored toilet reading. Seeing the mc whine or be scared all the time makes it a drudge to force yourself to read it. I stuck around, hoping the mc would improve, but all that has increased was the whining and whimpering, and it's not even smart enough to ask the right questions when Oz speaks to him. totally acts like it's never endured a life and death experience before.

why's he freaking put so bad. this is good. his secrets are hidden. can only trust 1 person with a secret, and that's yourself

you just don't stop with the angels do you...

again no vice principle and what about harry...

its the little things that annoy us. fumbles is not the principle he is the headmaster. get the small things correct if you want to charge.

ya, you elephant trank bats, then kill him, not play with him. his belt is just a tool his body is the weapon. you don't handcuff him. You shackle and gag him.

this is cool and all, but will he do any hp magic, or will he just walk around snapping his fingers..

shouldn't alchemist have something to do with alchemy, not just potions. like lead to gold etc bonus etc

about time we have a non loony Luna.

can't stand heriomine so glad it's Luna.

you are a really good writer. It's such a shame you continue to debase yourself by writing smut.

no Naruto, anine or what not. they do not fit this universe.

that's you, author, when you are trying to be cute and comes back to you. English please

terrible name, and you don't need a back story.. You don't even need to talk to those types of people .

they don't use radar, and you kill pirates, not chat and the whole dialog was terrible.

celestial being?

love how james auto blamed him. this gif is harry after the castration, enjoying the walk.

surprised. hreat so far

great chapter thanks for the fast update.

why the idiotic glasses push up, he's in a game, and they don't wear glasses. stop trying to make this dome kind of op smart gut from a Chinese cultivation novel. they guy lived most of this or learned it. He is no genius, more like an idiot after the rebuff debacle. you are showing anytime he goes off script he acts like an idiot.