sad, but I personally think overpowered fanfics like these get pretty fast very challenging to write as a whole aspect of normal books (poer progression) is pretty much non existent. not to say that i didn t enjoy this fan fic so far! I am also a fan, that there is no harem yet, as those can make or break even the best fics.

sad, hope you will pick this fan fic up again in the future

cliff hanger… nice work though

mean cliff hanger…

yes, finally!!!

did you do sth with this fic? i had it in a list and my recently read and it sadly just vanished, i am pretty lucky to have found it again as i didn t write down the exact title/author….

aint got enough time to research but can invent a new game, kinda fed up in my opinion, i hope it has a deeper meaning in the long run (maybe to sporn wizards to train their bodys? lesrn to fight underwater?)

let the dark elf come back as party member maybe?

your statement about the only exciting things is not true, building a world, a story which is completly unique is an exciting endavour on its own!!! PS: Pls don t let riddle become a dark lord…. Maybe something like a mercenary magician berserker who wanders the world and challenges everyonebeverything but doesnt start a war? (not to say that there wont be wars, only that he didnt start it :D ) But you do you, this is just my imagination running wild!

why always harem? can t you just make normal romantic relationship with a soulbond? I hope you can make it a good story still, but if it is just everyone falling unreasonably in live with mc it is just bad….

no worrys, why completed though? and not break?

did you lie (probably not), or what exactly happened now?

black clover is maybe one and exorcist … the second?

end harem unnecessery but everything else was quite enjoyable!

just ignore the big bad boy comments, you did an amazing job with this fanfic!

it is a nice idea, but it sadly did not hook me as they get send into a limitless adventure, without rly explaining the goal or why it is that important. also i don t like the handycap of not being able to read the books, but still being able to summon creatures put of them. i think this story has immense potential and wish you the best of skill/luck with it, but sadly at the current point in time i won t read it.

hi, sadly at some point the urgency of the whole matter disappeared, i like how it is going, but why is there so littleattention to the „pending“ disaster? btw. little idea: why don t you let him search for and „rescue“ the other users who „gave up“ (with a little bit of help from mind manipulation of course)? (as plot twist: after the 10 years i think it were they so or so get ejected and will „lose“ their last few years of live) what do you think of this idea? and why/why not will/won t you do it?

shitty novel at best, in the first 3 chaps a fuck ton of loopholes inaccuracys and bad grammar/read flow

pretty much perfect, only downside is the fast pace at the end, but i understand why it is nessecery.

thx god, would be a bummer if it already ended