Soulcrystal
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Any romantic concept in it??? Just to add some flavour and if harem even better, please do notify me if thereβs any Romance or harem, βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈ
Dumb mc. Poor character development Useless wishes Op but always nerfed mc Too much going around but mc is too dumb to care Pointless story developments Aimless story progress Very bad character personality projection What is so good about it that some people are calling it the best bdz fanfic? Like how? Are you blind? The cringe, bad writing,bad development, how does this a the best you ever seen? How? Have you never read anything before?
Okay story. Character actions are not that realistic and there is a good deal of plot armor. Darc's relationship with his mother is strange when he leaves home to search for the Dragon Balls. Perhaps there were reasons for that, but the relationship was never built up, making it rather unbelievable that a mother previously described as very protective would let her 8 year old child wander the world alone searching for magic wish balls (and that she'd just accept that such a thing exists).
This is the perfect combination between DBZ and cultivation. It uses cultivation ideas to fix up the martial arts system of DBZ while creating a more concise system which also explains things like SSJ transformations and how the mc can step on the path to Godhood. I do hope that he can become immortal on his own though since God kinda cock blocked him and immortality.
The OC characters who are his friends are just annoying, dumb and just awful lol the MC seems smart or strong but then he becomes passive and just doesnβt do anything it doesnβt make sense. If the author somehow got rid of these OC characters and got rid of all these people who now know of the dragon balls then Iβll change this rating but for now this is easily 1/5 since I canβt vote lower