Thank you for the chapter my good sir hats off to you for great story. Also for occlumency try to build a system higher then the one you have it would be interesting to see sort of like mental energy type stuff but don’ go all xanxia lol Ji write how u feel like doing just a thought I wished to share cudos and hope you make a patereon and make some real money off of this great story

Also I feel like flitwick makes a cool mentor personally

May I recommend learning enchanting and specializing in charms master for the reason being I feel enchanting is very cool as it can also be used as wards which will help him use magic in the summer but also compliment his dueling style say an enchanted item that can store a spell like bombarta maxima used in life death situation ?? Just a thought

Please explore potions or charms or transfiguration

Nidoking is the G

Awsome chap bro. Plzzz don’ bash anyone here I’ good off of that fanfic.net has many but I would say you’re going at a good pace so keep it up

I like it man it’ awsome I like the way you portray magic now add in mind magic and we begin an Awsome adventure I like padma patil she’s cool

Common boyo genius writer one more chap plzzzz today it’ cuz of the face slapping I wanna see

Get well soon

Are you gonna make the golden trio stand on the mc side

Please make shika more snEaky bro dont want to deal with danzo hate him and no sadaime and i want him tobe team asuma plzzzzzzzz

Bro You are an awsome writer please write a Harry Potter book bro someone whOs older than cannon characTer and is strong and gets gradually strong like your pokemon please

Your an awsome author bro these are just my suggestion thnx for your amazing hard work

Bro/OrMiss for now just conCentrate on powering Up his pokemon in the future you can have homm make different teams and stuff and keep powering his current ones and im sayi g when he goes to diFferent leagues like sinnoh or hoen

Please remove the seal from kekashi

if I may ask are we going to get a timeskip soon or is it going to be an evolution

wait till James graduates let him get power and then bam suppress him, and ask for a wizarding duel for slythern name ??? thats the best I got so far sorry ill try to come up with something better

thanks you for trying gl

yep its by dragon6

more power to you brother just please don't make his team mates like cannon fodder. Have u read the naruto the next god of shinobi have them like that and I mean similar not the same and if u haven't then I've give u a cool fanfic to read gl 😉 bro