Dumb mc. Poor character development Useless wishes Op but always nerfed mc Too much going around but mc is too dumb to care Pointless story developments Aimless story progress Very bad character personality projection What is so good about it that some people are calling it the best bdz fanfic? Like how? Are you blind? The cringe, bad writing,bad development, how does this a the best you ever seen? How? Have you never read anything before?
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LIKEVXZD_ZD:I agree with everything you said and I've seen infinitely better novels than this one but I wouldn't say that this one is rubbish it's just that the protagonist is weakened all the time and I don't like that