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Giga Chad
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Read books
And waste lots of chapters for something uselesssssss
So what's the difference between this and dmg/hp
And here it turns to garbage. cya
And he goes my excitement for the novel. I am so tired of lightning
they are as smart as the author is
This seems op but not cannon.
Then how would you make the stats and level in a game relevant? Lv 100 dies to an arrow to the head by lv 1 just because you don't like hp
Nono, that's his identity. Him getting his leg back would fk his balance, techniques and he'd have to train for quite a while to get back on his feet
I don't know if you meant to show his toughts since those are usualy in between 'these'
"...so I brought up the ideea..." is the mc talking, 1st person.
"Unfortunately, Uchiha Enlil couldn't help but drool....." is the narrator speaking or 3rd POV, 3rd person.
her request?
You should probably stick with either first or third pov at least within the same paragraph
I still don't understand why his talent would be bad. And are you talking about mc's talent or Tang San's talent?
one of the few*
You should probably use the English version for that technique.