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Here it is, the thing you call as shameless review from the author, where he gives himself 5 stars shamelessly, I will do the same. So, donβt mind me. Itβs been 2 months since I started writing this novel, 2 seasons are already done. So, I think itβs about time I write review for you guys. Before starting let me clear one thing first. From season 2 to last episode, all the chapters have been edited and are perfectly fine. For Season 1, itβs getting edited, all the confusing POV are gone. Cuz only second chapter had POV confusion, I have already sorted it out and by the end of this month, all the chapters would be edited. So, letβs start. First, this novel is addicted, so donβt get drowned on it. If you did, I ainβt gonna come and save you. Second, the couples in this novel are too damn fluffy and crazy. If you think you can hold yourself back from reading about them. Then, I applause you. Third, each chapter will bring you a new adventure. So, donβt for a second think you will get bored. Fourth, read at least 20 chapters before deciding anything. Donβt get disgusted by first chapter, cuz every novel need cause and effect for the future. At least, my novel does. Once you have read 20 chapters, you wonβt be able to leave, why? Because my Aiden is so crazy, that he will bind you to himself. Fifth, this novel is not for kids, itβs full of sex and smut. Only read if itβs your cup of tea. Sixth, this novel updates 2 chapters a day. And I am not gonna stop until this novel ends. So, you donβt need to worry about me leaving this novel in middle. Seventh, if you like this novel, then do support it by sending power stones, tags like, comment, gifts, reviews, etc. Eighth, English is not my first, second, third, or even forth language. So, if you find any mistake, do tell, I will correct them. Thank you.
First of all, we are here to learn and improve our skills and talents... it takes hard work, but is worth it. I keep my fingers crossed so that you, and people, who just start their journey with writing won't get discouraged. So... Don't worry so much about errors, we make them all, you can always correct them. From the very beginning of the story, the reader can feel that you have a concept for your book. The synopsis is intriguing. For me, a very conservative reader is annoying to see that you are jumping from one POV to another. The story would be a lovely one if you would write it in the 3 rd person's POV. Think abou it.
I will give my honest opinion. Your story is quite interesting so I will give constructive criticism as someone who is not good at English too, at the suggestion of some who helped me I started using the Grammarly app. Try using it to correct your mistakes too, it can improve the quality of your story. I hope the author continues to make an effort.
I going to make sure that I can do this as short as possible because I not a fan of boy love really but I do like good stories though and it starting off great for the author telling us the situation first and than giving us something to go by on and that is something that is a cause and effect. due to the ability of the mother and he reaction as a person of his own will. keep it author.