Review Detail of Aeipathy_02 in [BL] Ten Faced Boyfriend

Writing Quality. There are some g-errors but not to the point it will hinder your reading. But what made me just confused is the inconsistency of the povs. Try maintaining one, whether it will be third or first pov. Story Development. The story was moving fast but it's alright. Character Design. The characters are written well and can still be fleshed out. Overall it has an interesting premise. Keep it up, author!