The novel starts off with overly complicated vocabulary in the first 100+ chapters, where each paragraph seems to repeat the same ideas but phrased differently. It feels like the author is just trying to reach a word count rather than advancing the plot or developing the characters meaningfully. The main character (MC) is disappointing. Despite being a transmigrator, he behaves foolishly and lacks the qualities expected of someone with such an advantage. The novel includes an antihero tag, but it would be more fitting to describe the MC as "brain dead" due to his poor decision-making and lack of initiative. There are notable similarities to the novel *Shadow Slave*. In both stories, the MCs are portrayed as weak and easily manipulated by the main female leads. The world settings and supporting characters are also strikingly similar, making the story feel unoriginal. The MC is indecisive and lacks conviction, coming across as socially awkward and unsure of himself. He fails to recognize when to assert himself and when to be strategic. The author has done a poor job of portraying his character, leading the novel to feel more like a drama rather than an engaging story. Overall, the novel falls short in character development and originality, and its execution leaves much to be desired.
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