This one is good. There have been many Hades-PJO fics on this platform. All of them have fallen through and been dropped. I will fully support this with all my might. I'm fine with even one chapter a month. Just don't drop it.

The story as a whole is boring. But the writing quality is good. Oh, what ruins the story itself. Because whether you like it or not, Greek mythology is a story with a beginning, middle and end. So all The Greek mythology novels will have the same story.😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔

"God gives me wishes" retard story.

Till now, chapter 19, or chapter 13 since the story started, the development of the story has been very slow, the chapters are currently large info dumps or going off on tangents that don't seem to hold much relevance to the story's progression. As it is right now I don't recommend reading the story, it has barely started and in my opinion will face problems with people continuing to read the story if it's going to take another 7 chapters to properly hook readers. An improvement would be making the first five chapters full of information into auxiliary chapters, then putting in the summary space what kind of readers would like this style of writing.

The world background and character design is done well Pls don’t drop Pls update as frequently as possible 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

This has to be the worst pjo story ever written. The writing and story development are bad with nothing good about them like others have said how did u spend like 5 or 6 chps just writing about how they were making their forms you could have put all that in one chp. The world building is bad but not the worst but considering your basing it off a great story don’t know how you made it bad.

it's very good so far , it has good foundation you didn't neglect the lore and most importantly you didn't trap your self with op mc writing block . keep going, good job

The only mistake in this story is not having dialogues, not much interaction between the gods, I don't know, it seems like I'm watching a story without much character depth, if you knew how to make the most of it you would have used the ten years of war in the story, it was too quick , one moment Hades is having an internal monologue then boom, war, and the transition isn't the best, we don't know if Hades is simply explaining something that he knows about the war or is simply actually in the war, you only understand later.

Fill the chapters with useless words and in 19 chapters Hades only spoke once. It's a terrible story.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ