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It's been really good so far, I really like the character interactions. There's just one big problem, in my opinion. The problem is the Kitsune powers you randomly decided to give Jackson. Because of this, he'll become an OP and solve all the problems with extreme ease, and there'll be no suspense. You could have easily left him as part werewolf, part Kanima, and he would still have been a strong character, but not overly so.

Will and the others knew something crazy was going to happen, so they calmly played Dungeons and Dragons? It doesn't make any sense, just as it doesn't make sense for the protagonist to let Will be captured.

He has no chance of beating him even with his army.

It is absolutely not true that Annihilus is stronger than Galactus....

Non è vero che ci sono due Avengers a Westview.....

I understand which fanfiction you are referring to but in that case the harem has not yet appeared in the chapter I read. Then after as I already said the interactions between the characters become strange in my opinion.

Ok but you didn't put harem in the tags.

I'm not like you. It doesn't take much to become "cosmic" in the Marvel Universe. No, harems are horrible. When there are harems, character interactions suck.

In the Marvel Universe, there are a lot of cool ways to get strong... There's no need to use this crap.Then he conjures objects out of thin air with the system and the Shield doesn't notice.The harem would be even worse than the system....

This fanfiction seemed very promising before this nonsense of the system appeared. Too bad.