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It has become a bit monotonous, There's no exciting feeling I get like when I first found your story and read it for the first time, I wish you could have made his adventure more exciting or at least focus more on him so I don't feel so distant from the main character, it doesn't help I hate his wife đ
literal worst pairing. romance just doesn't feel authentic enough or realistic enough and his friend's just don't act their age unless they're throwing tantrums as the only sign they behave like children