I had never come across second person pov before so I didn't think much before starting this, I really thought that all these people in the comments were exaggerating because in my view it's not possible that a simple pov can bother someone so much, that was up to me I started reading, I read 2 paragraphs and I was already horrified, every time I saw the word "you" it broke the immersion, I started to wonder why something like this exists, it really doesn't make sense, there are people who can read like this? I congratulate them because I couldn't stand 3 chapters, I think that was my biggest literary trauma lol.
Liked it!
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It depends on the reader's mindset, though I admit this story of mine is far from polished, just imagine that your DM is narrating what you did in a past session to you.
