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This is one of those Y/N fics that only special people like. The overall concept of the story wasn't all that bad, but the execution of it made my head spin. Especially with this first person like view that describes how YOU supposedly experience a scene and stuff rather than the character. Its too alien for me. It's like someone describing their toe nail fetish using your own pov. Because you don't experience the world in their way, and thus don't share it, it becomes an absolute xtremely trippy and dizzying reading experience that feels like you entered a roller coaster just as you got out of the car after a long trip with your motion sickness having acted up, and someone suddenly having pushed you in the front car of some messed up rollarcoaster ride with the excuse it will cure your motion sickness. .. Needless to say, I would not recommend a story from the Y/N pov

Hello there, John is my name, and as you know, I'm the author, and I'm writing this little review to clarify a few points. Firstly, the matter of capitalisation errors, you will continue to see them in future chapters, but they will later be rectified in a second more polished version of this story. Secondly, the matter of the story being written in second person, that won't change, but perhaps you can have more fun if you simply imagine it like your GM narrating a past D&D session to you. And thirdly, I ask that you honestly think about your ratings, people that give one star because they think the overall rating is too high aren't much better than people spamming five-star reviews. And with that, I wish all of you much fun with my story. :D

If this was in a normal POV, it would have been interesting ..................................................................... ..........

The POV is actually fine, yes it's weird if you're unfamiliar with it but you get used to it as you read on. For the capitalization, it's easy to ignore and well, would you rather have this than horrendous grammar. For the OPness of the main character, I'm fine with it. I actually quite like the sense of slice of life that this provides rather than the 'grind' for more abilities. Although I would like more interactions with the other characters such as her parents or her siblings.

I'm sure there is a decent story to be told here, and I'm willing to bet the author put a moderate amount of time and effort into writing and editing it but the 2nd person pov is a complete turn-off. This type of book would probably do a lot better on Wattpad where stories told in this fashion take up around 35% of the total stories on there.

I won't say much about the story, but, really, you made a Villain in GoT? There are like, 1 maybe 2 genuinely good people in the whole story and you felt like add another evil one?

The poinT of view is such a pain like The stiry and the idea are really nice but pov is ruining it 😞😞😞😞😞😞

I dont mind the PoV, the story is good as well but take it witha grain of salt bcz this narrating style os not for everyone and I am a sucker for villain MC