I've only played Fallout shelter, Fallout New Vegas, Fallout 3 and watched Fallout 4 gameplay, and I have to say that your story is quite good even if set in an original setting. Pace is not that fast compared to Steel Waste, and better in my opinion because it focused more on world building and character development. Looking forward for the new chapters. Good job, sir!

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Story is good, makes you want to know what comes next or why did that happen. but the writing is like poetry, its descriptive which good but it’s a little much when almost every sentence is like that though. so good story but chill on the poetry. last thing mc is all over the place.

I freaking love your story! Steel waste is good all but it does not have the depth and story like yours, SW is more like a faced pace Ok character wuixa thing 9ts always escalating, but yours...... It's a diamond on the rough! I am a huge fallout fan and there sent many good or complete fallout fanfic on here. I've read most 9f the good ones on archive 0f our 9wn and fanfiction . net. I'm not exactly sure when this tales place though... it this based in the games 9r an all 9ut original fallout world? Anyways I await each chapter with an eager smile, so keep it up! Just know I'm one of your readers![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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One of the best Fallout fanfictions I've read in a long while. The characters, the suspense. When the first volume ended. I audibly gasped and was giddy to get to the next one. Love it.

We should all pray to Godd Howard to make this a movie that’s how good this story is. Or even better a 20+ hour series. It’s not written like most of the stuff on Webnovel, like iseakis or harems, but like an actual novel. It’s also formatted in a way so you don’t need to know a lot of Fallout lore to enjoy it. I’d wager that if you were completely new to the world of Fallout you’d enjoy this. As with the games and stories be prepared for some angst, blood and gore and dark stuff if completely new. I could rattle on but until next time: “From the Tower with power” dear readers and author. From the Tower with power :)

This story is absolutely one if the best fallout fanfiction i have read. The story is original and compelling while keeping to the lore of fallout. the characters are all fleshed out and have real motivation and have depth. The writing is also very good and great grammar which is a definite plus. I know i will be looking forward to every knew chapter as i quickly fell in love with this story. To sum it up the author has done an amazing job and I can’t wait to see where your story goes!!!

If you're expecting people to eat Deathclaw omelette for breakfast or challenge themselves by racing one across the desert, don't hold your breath, because there are barely any predatory animals around. I have it on good authority that there won't be any fusion-powered cars to race Deathclaws either, because apparently they are unfixable as of this moment, so use your connections to escape your isolationist vault and pray to god you can get your hands on a cheat item that keeps you alive until you find power armor, because raiders can smell fear in a five-mile radius. The only thing to keep you company while you're trying to end your misery in a rockslide or under a collapsing building are grand views and mutated wildlife. Oh, and hungry super mutants. If you do get into a fight that you barely win, you're out of luck, because healing takes a long time and wound infection gets them all in the end. Nowhere is safe, you have no backup until you con someone into dying for you and wasting resources is a death sentence. The only thing that can keep you competitive is hard work. Overall, a 5/7 story, mostly bc it is a bit watery at times.