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2021-11-16 07:05

This story is absolutely one if the best fallout fanfiction i have read. The story is original and compelling while keeping to the lore of fallout. the characters are all fleshed out and have real motivation and have depth. The writing is also very good and great grammar which is a definite plus. I know i will be looking forward to every knew chapter as i quickly fell in love with this story. To sum it up the author has done an amazing job and I can’t wait to see where your story goes!!!

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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's great to hear that that the characters come across as I hoped. As for vol ll, I won't say much, other than it's more 'Rosy'

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