It’s trash dumb and just trash I read until 8th chapter and the story to me just plummeted like he gained zero to nil while she gained his everything like he is GOD how can a small world like share powers that a God made for him to be shared so easily I’m going to come back in a year to see if it’s better but for know this is on a blacklist for me!
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You read up to the 8th chapter and judge it is trash? I am not even going to delete this review to make people see it... It shows something important about you :D.
but taking out the insults he is right, I distorted everything from the mc to konan and he did not get anything.
KasiCair:You read up to the 8th chapter and judge it is trash? I am not even going to delete this review to make people see it... It shows something important about you :D.
that looks annoying to read.
Then don't. *shrug*
Marshal_Omiga:that looks annoying to read.
I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
CodezL:but taking out the insults he is right, I distorted everything from the mc to konan and he did not get anything.
You also showed that he could understand the seals just by looking at them like him, and that his energy control was so good that he learned to hide his chakra and he can even use MOKUTON, so don't write nonsense ...
KasiCair:I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
besides that the mc already had his own konan since before the fusion of souls, she was already a fan of him, you also wrote that the chakra and the density of the konan chakra increased as much as his, if you had not given him the individual talents from mc to konan so I wouldn't complain, but I distorted everything from mc to konan and he got NOTHING, because everything he got as more chakra and denser was something she ALSO got
KasiCair:I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
* Sigh * ignore them author they're just a bunch of shits who want to cry about everything, they think they can criticize a story just because they don't like something, write good arguments at least and not this shit
It is fanny soullyter it is inba and 1 dont logical moment it is novel
But is that not what a review is for?
DaoistLadyKiller:* Sigh * ignore them author they're just a bunch of shits who want to cry about everything, they think they can criticize a story just because they don't like something, write good arguments at least and not this shit
Go back to school Friend
A_reader_for_fun:But is that not what a review is for?
Lol r u new to webnovel . If you are then welcome noob.
DaoistLadyKiller:Go back to school Friend
you don't even understand what a review implies, stop reading on webnovel and go to school boy
Shadewind:Lol r u new to webnovel . If you are then welcome noob.
Wow you are also a mentally retard as you can't even understand my comment .
DaoistLadyKiller:you don't even understand what a review implies, stop reading on webnovel and go to school boy
what I see is like trying to escape the truth that you don't even have school level knowledge by making coherent arguments about something that happens on the internet
Shadewind:Wow you are also a mentally retard as you can't even understand my comment .
R u a idiot . I perfectly understand what reviews mean . But in this site review works completely different from what it supposed to be . So i ask you r u new to webnovel and from you response you are . And why i ask you that question even through your level is 2 cause i thought maybe this is your new account . So you tell me who is lacking school knowledge . Maybe its my fault expecting you to understand normal sentence but who would know you can't understand such simple things. So yeah its really my lack of knowledge for not knowing people like you exist.
DaoistLadyKiller:what I see is like trying to escape the truth that you don't even have school level knowledge by making coherent arguments about something that happens on the internet
I still am in school? High school in fact.
DaoistLadyKiller:Go back to school Friend
It shows how people don't like your story for a reason. Why do you think a lot of people in the reviews are complaining about this. If you are not able to deliver the story early. That's your fault. It's called a bad advertisement.
KasiCair:You read up to the 8th chapter and judge it is trash? I am not even going to delete this review to make people see it... It shows something important about you :D.
TOFIE:It shows how people don't like your story for a reason. Why do you think a lot of people in the reviews are complaining about this. If you are not able to deliver the story early. That's your fault. It's called a bad advertisement.
Shut up your annoying prob sucked up to girls your whole life if u want konan to be the mc than just do it, it’s funny to see an mc get just fodderized by an girl who took all his talents she has more than him he didn’t get an ounce of an power up now she has his talent multiply it by hers now boys we got ourselves Kaguya number 2 smh....
KasiCair:I wrote that both of their chakra expanded and got denser. I never once stated just HOW MUCH of his talents Konan received. I never stated she would actually be able to use them. I never stated she would be a prodigy at seals. I never stated how and if she would be able to utilize nature chakra... all I did was say her chakra control was extraordinary thanks to the talents. The thing I did was to not give the MC her bloodline through it. Because it was supposed to be rooted not only in her chakra or soul but also in her DNA, something the MC did not receive. And her bloodline was the ONLY thing the small girl could have given him. MC received Konan herself. It was not mind-control but he still had her loyalty and the soul merge made them 'inseparable' (not literally). Now my question is... did you read even one chapter or did you just repeated what was said in bad reviews? Because it is CLEARLY stated their chakra grew a lot and got denser and more compressed so saying he received nothing is like saying you got no money from winning a lottery. Now, if you read it and still don't like it... that's your opinion and I will respect it. But at least get your facts straight. As for not deleting this review... I won't do it. Honestly, I would actually be glad if the guy actually DID NOT come back and read this story. If he can get butthurt enough to drop it due to one chapter he didn't like, it would save both of us the effort if he just decided to never ever click on this story.
