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Draj
DrajLv73yr
2021-08-14 01:03

chapter 160, story progression is worst, boring, the release rate is slow, dragged out story, at this point I don't even know who is the MC, this Kazuma is annoying even after receiving help remained ungrateful, he's received punishment for his uncontrollable tongue yet he still continues such behavior, if I can change the ratings now I wound give this 1 star just for the sake of earlier chaps and MC, 43(till ch160) chapters without much of MC involvement

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MasGalonAqua
MasGalonAquaLv12

Thanks bro. I Don't want to waste my time reading the whole konosuba arc.

Draj
DrajLv7

you can read the earlier chaps I loved it but konosuba part took a bad turn for me 😅

MasGalonAqua:Thanks bro. I Don't want to waste my time reading the whole konosuba arc.
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Laplaces_dream
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I had rated this book 5 stars before, but now I have to give it a 1 star. . . At the beginning of the story, everything was AWESOME!!! There were very few Fanfics that could actually be better than this... But for the last FEW MONTHS, every single chapter has been about the adventures of the side characters... There has been no MC, no Annihilation Maker, and of course not a single bit of DxD... Infact the DxD of this story might even be an AU, with a female protagonist instead of Issei... . Now I saw many reviews defending the book saying that the entire last arc has been given to us to explain the mechanics of the multiverse, so it is our fault that we don't like it. You know what? I am not reading Fanfics on Webnovel about DxD to learn about how the multiverse works! I want actual stories, actual Fanfic, not an entirely AU DxD, or an entirely AU Fate universe, or an entirely AU Konosuba!!! BTW, warning: Every single world that is in this Fanfic is an AU, with hundreds of other reincarnators, no resemblence of the actual plot or the characters... . Now it is not that I don't like a little bit of exposition about the multiverse... But that's it, just a LITTLE BIT, not an entire arc stretching 30+ chapters and more than three months... I like stories with other reincarnators and the MC has to kill them or win against them, but that was not the actual topic here! This Fanfic was supposed to be about DxD and Annihilation Maker, but we haven't even got a smidgen of DxD... The author is trying every single genre out there that many people read and trying to mix them all together to create this huge unrecognisable mess. Where there is almost every famous genre in the Fanfic section but not a single one is in the appropriate amount. This story includes DxD, but only for a few chapters then we never talk about the main cast ever again. There is Annihilation Maker but half of the story is not even about that, this story is about the MC who is actually Lucifer Morningstar. So after the first arc we almost never see the use of Annihilation Maker ever again. There is a Chat Group, which I will admit has been done quite well, but if the MC is not even there for such a significant chunk of the story, it doesn't become enjoyable anymore. There are other reincarnators that the MC's group needs to kill, but I didn't come here to read about other reincarnators! I need Annihilation Maker and I need DxD! Give it to me!

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