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Roy Mustang Template in Harry Potter

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MC gets transmigrated to a Harry Potter world with Merchant System

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CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6CliffkunLolRekt

Chapter 18 officially killed the story have fun with your worm of a mc author

WaveringMoon
WaveringMoonLv15WaveringMoon

the concept was a good idea, but this is very clearly a wish fulfillment fantasy that ignores almost everything in harry potter. also the book is half filled with constant walls of text of system stats. the book is also extremely fast paced to the point where it's missing a lot of details.

Dhyan_Jain
Dhyan_JainLv4Dhyan_Jain

Well since the only chapter is a info dump and the concept is quite liking to my taste , i am looking forward to this and waiting for author to put some chapters

Noble_K1ng
Noble_K1ngLv4Noble_K1ng

So far I like it, the MC isn’t naive and stupid and if it stays like this the story’s gon be a W

Swan_Reader
Swan_ReaderLv13Swan_Reader

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

sean_goins
sean_goinsLv15sean_goins

very good so far hope for updates more and good character building so far

jonkit
jonkitLv4jonkit

I see the vision, but the translation is pretty bad, not the worst on this platform, but still bad. Because of that it constantly switches perspective: "Roy chooses >skill< and because of that I do more damage" even though it's about the same person. so overall: nice premise but translation (?) ruins it, only read if you can stand bad translations

Rak
RakLv5Rak

it start good but now randomly going anywhere you guys give it a try................................................................................

DaoistglM5nf
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Thomsonandrew5235
Thomsonandrew5235Lv14Thomsonandrew5235

I really enjoy it but it needs to be updated more often to be up there with my favourites

Rocky_Staggs
Rocky_StaggsLv15Rocky_Staggs

I didn't wanna try this one. Thought the mesh wouldn't make a good story. Wow amazing story great author pulling this out of the hat. Keep it up.

DaoistRovWhC
DaoistRovWhCLv11DaoistRovWhC

A wish fulfillment fantasy. The Harry Potter world is used but mostly ignored. Half of the text seems to be status updates or walls of text. I couldn't even make it two dozen chapters. It progresses so fast there isn't actually any story.

aiden_rivera
aiden_riveraLv4aiden_rivera

Good story author can’t count the Mf mc stats properly

jcp1207
jcp1207Lv3jcp1207

No está mal la historia, pero sería mejor que mejorará la escritura así como el volcado de información, de ese modo la mitad del capítulo no sea de información irrelevante... Gracias por el trabajo

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