Chapter 18 officially killed the story have fun with your worm of a mc author

the concept was a good idea, but this is very clearly a wish fulfillment fantasy that ignores almost everything in harry potter. also the book is half filled with constant walls of text of system stats. the book is also extremely fast paced to the point where it's missing a lot of details.

Well since the only chapter is a info dump and the concept is quite liking to my taste , i am looking forward to this and waiting for author to put some chapters

So far I like it, the MC isn’t naive and stupid and if it stays like this the story’s gon be a W

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

very good so far hope for updates more and good character building so far

the first half should be called roy mustang and the dungeon diving. the second half is roy mustang is a simp for a random summon who takes control of his system... it's mostly dungeon crawling and system info dumps then it's just him being a simp and random smut... I wouldn't be surprised if eventually she cucks him

never seen an author throw his own story quite like this

I see the vision, but the translation is pretty bad, not the worst on this platform, but still bad. Because of that it constantly switches perspective: "Roy chooses >skill< and because of that I do more damage" even though it's about the same person. so overall: nice premise but translation (?) ruins it, only read if you can stand bad translations

it start good but now randomly going anywhere you guys give it a try................................................................................