Swan_Reader

Totally garbage. In the beginning, the author showed MC hothead but after 2 chapters he is simply over-colleens it is just an insult. every wannabe author just tries to force MC into canon like Dog in Heat is really important to MC has to befriend the cast . totally a disappointment for Ikaris

I loved your work Nice character design. I think you should increase the word count of each chapter. update more, good read so far. More chapters needed

I think the author is super dumb. super op MC = super dumb intelligence. the guy created advanced AI and built a phantom drive but doesn't have some backbone. I don't have actual reasoning behind this kind of author with good boy type MC always wiggling their tail for good deeds. total disappointment don't read it time waste

what a waste .mc has a powerful system that recruits powerful wizards but still little whip in front of Dumbledore some Chinese logic shitty work. destroyer of eyes don't read this garbage

one of the best boys' fic It has so much potential. update more and increase the word limit. love the work. good work so far waiting for the new chapters. good luck

good read. The character intro is also very good. hope you update more for us. make the chapters long, and increase the word limit. good work author hope you continue this work

shit content. A Nephilim running around scared by a few mutants. come on what the heck is the protagonist hard working through fire shit just say you just stretching your shitty content making much shitter. waste of dante sparada waste of marvel waste of internet waste of time waste of concept totally garbage.

total trash just a MC becames a villain in a game he played 10000 hours acting like simp.its insulting to read this kind of novel .totally garbage

very good story. The characters are good too. you need to focus on MC and also show the outside world's reaction towards them It seems lacking Don't do excessive time skip don't drop it it has very high potential

Good read so far. Chapters are bit short needs to increase the word limit . It has potential . Update more. love your work. Good luck for the future.