Item: Roy Mustang Template in Harry Potter
Rating: 2.2
Author: F0cus

F0cusLv410mth

2024-03-11 13:02

Well since the only chapter is a info dump and the concept is quite liking to my taste , i am looking forward to this and waiting for author to put some chapters

Roy Mustang Template in Harry Potter

Tomas_Vega_2683

3.2

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Liked by 11 people

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Helia_KingLv4

Then why leave a review with 2 and a half stars

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IcelingLv14

They reviewed too early

Helia_King:Then why leave a review with 2 and a half stars

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shin_rae_miuLv4

mc can summon other individual, the mc is three souls in one body. it aint worth it.

7mth

HabutheriLv4

You should make a review, I hate people who give 5 stars too early

shin_rae_miu:mc can summon other individual, the mc is three souls in one body. it aint worth it.

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I see the vision, but the translation is pretty bad, not the worst on this platform, but still bad. Because of that it constantly switches perspective: "Roy chooses >skill< and because of that I do more damage" even though it's about the same person. so overall: nice premise but translation (?) ruins it, only read if you can stand bad translations

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