ˢʰʰʰʰʰ ᵈᵒⁿ'ᵗ ᵗᵉˡˡ ᵗʰᵉ ᶜᵃᵗ ᵇᵘᵗ ᴵ ᵃᵐ ᵇᵉᶦⁿᵍ ᵗʰʳᵉᵃᵗᵉⁿᵉᵈ ᵗᵒ ᵐᵃᵏᵉ ᵗʰᶦˢ ʳᵉᵛᶦᵉʷᵎ ˢᵉⁿᵈ ʰᵉˡᵖ
Jokes aside, the novel so far(chapter 8) is to my liking. Let's start the review yeah?
Writing Quality
- Other than minor typos and some little grammar mistakes, I didn't see any significant issues with the quality of writing. He'll, compared to other FFs the quality of this novel is a couple notches higher than average. The word count for each chapter is a solid 1500-3000+ words, which is something every reader likes to see.
Story Development
- The story development currently is very slow. Though some may not like this, I encourage a slow pace as it allows us the readers to grasp the main character's personality more. I think Cat has done a fine job with the character interactions so far and put in a lot of detail to give a fairly clear image of what is occurring. Unlike some other FFs, Cat also has a timeline prepared so we can expect to have a somewhat logical story development for some time.
Character Design
- In my opinion, the MC was introduced with sufficient, detailed information: his background, current situation at the time, personality, habits, and thought process. The MC was portrayed as a narcissistic womanizer who seeks entertainment and his thought process really helped grasp the MC's character.
- Other than the main character, Cat has done a fine job in introducing his own original characters to the MC and creating smooth interactions between them. Although the character design, itself, may be slightly biased... *cough* - nekopara - *cough* he still did a good job in keeping track of the differing thought possesses of the characters when they interacted with each other.
Updating Stability
- I honestly don't know lol
World Background
- Well, this section is pretty simple, the world is BnHA so most people should have a general idea of the world background. However, Cat expanded the world background as he took in various factors to create a logically sound location for the MC's starting point, an orphanage. I won't go too deep on why it makes sense for an orphanage to exist or why it makes sense for the MC to be there, but basically the children with no parents are collateral damage who live in orphanages supported by the government. From this we can infer the MC's parents died and he was sent to an orphanage, or at least something similar.
Writing this review with 4 hours of sleep and 16+ hours of remaining awake so excuse me for any brevities or typos.
