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that one piece fic was prolly his worst one lmao.
yikes this is too chinese for me.....
sigh..this had potential since people could see the stand but oh well.....
yep that whole hitman angle was the small flaw this novel had but it can be easily fixed.
Bruh hopefully this oc girl doesn’t take up too much screen time…
Oh yeah I read that one.Its written by wall who has good world building skills.
lmao.
I feel like the fights kinda dragging on. This kind of fight would work well in an anime world but I think with Luke's powers and Wednesday's build, fights that drag on are disadvantageous to them.
yep atleast he used to be in "character" before but this ain't even half of sukuna. What makes sukuna so great is that he carries an intimidation factor but here mc just has sukuna powers but while fighting he comes off as deku.
ok this chap would be touching if he wasn't fricking sukuna....Bruh I know he is a fake but come on, he should be mogging overhaul by now. Hopefully he gains atleast one finger worth sukuna power soon.