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TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv44yr
2020-10-11 15:10

Have not started yet but from the synopsis I am looking forward to this fic. PLEASE ADD ROMANCE. I dont care if it is harem or not but I feel like romance is a must. Especially in a reincarnation story. What man in their right mind would reincarnate into an anime world and not get with at least one of the main girls of any anime. Some citrus (lemons & limes) would be appreciated too. I vote for Camie, Momo and/or Himiko. (most wanted to least wanted) For those of you who dont remember this is Camie...

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Klazy_Labbit
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hmm...romance is undecided and I am not sure if there will even be romance in this yet. Mc is not a good person so even if there is romance of any kind, it will be pretty much one sided. Mc is still a kid at present so I am not thinking abt romance for now. That said do read the book and hope you enjoy it.

TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv4

Evil or not everyone has needs hehe. I dont really care if it is one sided for the most part as long as they are recognized as a couple. I agree it should not start when he is a child. Maybe childhood friends, one sided crush in middle school then they get together in high school.

Klazy_Labbit:hmm...romance is undecided and I am not sure if there will even be romance in this yet. Mc is not a good person so even if there is romance of any kind, it will be pretty much one sided. Mc is still a kid at present so I am not thinking abt romance for now. That said do read the book and hope you enjoy it.
Master4thWall
Master4thWallLv4

I want some Shotaaaaa senses!

Klazy_Labbit:hmm...romance is undecided and I am not sure if there will even be romance in this yet. Mc is not a good person so even if there is romance of any kind, it will be pretty much one sided. Mc is still a kid at present so I am not thinking abt romance for now. That said do read the book and hope you enjoy it.
TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv4

Master4thWall:I want some Shotaaaaa senses!
Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

and I feel that killing people like you is mandatory ... if I had reincarnated, I would want to be strong and fight, kill many people just like you, seriously what you do in this life ... just think with the stick, I think you don't it would last 1 year in any anime, just another pervetido without IQ.

Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

not everyone, child, and how anyone would want to be with you, a useless one who fantasizes about 2d drawings hahqaha

TheFlagGuy:Evil or not everyone has needs hehe. I dont really care if it is one sided for the most part as long as they are recognized as a couple. I agree it should not start when he is a child. Maybe childhood friends, one sided crush in middle school then they get together in high school.
TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv4

Hope you die alone in some ditch. Obviously what would happen if you were in any anime world.

Thiago_guedes:and I feel that killing people like you is mandatory ... if I had reincarnated, I would want to be strong and fight, kill many people just like you, seriously what you do in this life ... just think with the stick, I think you don't it would last 1 year in any anime, just another pervetido without IQ.
Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

better than being a pervert without IQ.

TheFlagGuy:Hope you die alone in some ditch. Obviously what would happen if you were in any anime world.
TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv4

Thiago_guedes:better than being a pervert without IQ.
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