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2020-10-10 12:25

Pretty good looks like it can go far. Nice cold and evil mc. His quirk seems strong but looks like it can be very versatile in combat. Can't think of anything else to say Gotta get dat character limit. 26908642378908654367889000887655466899007755421346779987654335

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