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Martial Transcendence

作者: ChanduGod
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Read my new novel-- The Demon God Needs No System to be The Strongest Reincarnated into a world full of powerful cultivators. Du Chan, who was a normal person, contracted a disease? the day he was born. But after his encounter with an unknown object, he started cultivating. Among the countless cultivators, Du Chan, with the help of the unknown object, grew into a peerless genius. He killed his way into the Top of the World and surpassed the limits of Humans. He became Legend itself! ************** DISCLAIMER: English isn't my native language so there are some errors here and there. PS: I do not own this cover, if you're the owner and want me to take it down please contact me. Thank you! Join My Discord- https://discord.gg/u5tHEdE446 More Power Stones, More Chapters. Support The Book. ********* My other novel; Ancient Father of Cultivation!

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Chapter 1DU CHAN!

It's early in the morning. In the eastern mountains that are peaceful without the presence of any beasts. There, on the grass, a boy is sleeping. He looks to be 4 or 5 years old. That boy's name was Du Chan.

Initially, Du Chan was from earth. He was a 27 years old otaku who died of a sudden heart attack.

But when he opened his eyes, he found himself inhabiting a 1-year-old's body! He was an orphan back on earth, and he is one in this world too.

Du Chan lives in an orphanage near the calm eastern mountains. He doesn't have any friends because he was born with a strange disease, and doctors claimed that he couldn't live past eight years.

With a weak body and so little time to live, no one wanted him as a friend, so he spent his days alone and always came to the mountains to rest and enjoy the sceneries.

This world is ruled by the strong and powerful people when the weak folks didn't have any options but follow in their shadows.

Du Chan always wanted to practice martial arts so that he could become strong, but his body is frail that he couldn't even run 100 meters without taking a break.

Du Chan woke up from his lazy nap and made to return to the orphanage...it was almost dinner time.

"Ding!" "Ding!"

That was the timely dinner bell. All of the orphans rushed to the big room of the orphanage, where they usually ate dinner.

All children began eating their meals, and when Du Chan finally came, he was late.

"You came late again," Gu auntie said with a bright smile. She looked like she was in her 30's

Gu auntie was the one who looks after the whole orphanage.

"Haha, yes I forgot to check the time..sorry!" Du Chan said.

"its okay, tomorrow is your birthday. Did you forget?" Gu auntie said to him, that's was not his birthday but the day Gu Auntie found him.

"Oh! I forgot auntie" Du Chan said with shock on his face. It has been four years since he came to this world.

"Ok. Come and eat"

"Okay"

After eating, Du Chan returned to his room and stared at its roof, all the while thinking.

'Why did I even came to this world?'

With a final disappointment, he fell asleep.

The following day, Du Chan had already woken up and was waiting for breakfast.

Gu auntie brought a small cake and said, "Today is Du Chan's birthday so let's celebrate!"

"Yaaaaa!" all children screamed happily, not because of Du Chan's birthday but because there was cake.

And after celebrating, the birthday boy returned to the mountains as he always did. After entering the mountains, he saw black smoke coming from the middle of the mountains.

When he reached the site of the smoke, he saw a big door.

The door was so big that it was more than 30 feet high and gave a very frightening feel to the onlooker.

Du Chan, at that moment, thought of returning to the orphanage. He didn't want to look at the door. It was filled with skulls and bones, and in the middle of it was a liquid that looked a lot like blood.

When Du Chan turned and was leaving, he felt someone calling him. He then stopped, looked back at it, and remembered that he wouldn't live more than 2 or 3 years anyway.

"Let's see what's beyond the door"

Du Chan approached. He was like an ant in front of its vast stature.

When he touched the door, he felt like the whole world had turned dark and dizzy...

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INITIAL THOUGHTS: -Normally I don't write a review before 100 chapters however, this novel in my opinion has reached a threshold to be reviewed. So without further ado... WRITING QUALITY: -Out of 5 I gave this a 3. That means pretty good with room to improve. Readable enough to where I'll continue reading however, I notice the errors enough impacting my quality of reading. Hopefully, over time the author improves his English proficiency for a better quality novel. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -This is a bit earlier to say given the less than 100 chapters uploaded. That being said it's reached the initial threshold of 40+, unlike some authors who stop around there. STORY DEVELOPMENT -This novel just like most novels tells us there is a higher world/ realm for the MC to explore once he reached a certain threshold in cultivation. I got no problem with this since it expands how far the plot can go. -The MC is at his first place of major growth showing many future plots on the horizon. I find this to be great as it satisfies the present plus links future plot points ahead. -Overall well done. CHARACTER DESIGN -This section and world background are by far the most developed so far. -The MC is starting this his original personality from his past life while getting influenced by his present experiences. He has shown based on the techniques he's found and powerhouses he's come across to have changed the way he views and interacts with his environment which is a plus for me. For his personality, you can see he isn't(in my opinion) Supremely Evil no Righteous when compared to other characters. He's more like an anti-hero. A man that is willing to be cruel to the cruel while treating the innocent with respect assuming they do the same. He's shown to be hostile towards a certain type of sect because of their methods to grow stronger. I'm curious about his stance towards larger picture plots, but that will be left for future chapters. -Side characters have some personality and are integral to the MC development which is good. Some examples... -His best friend shows sincere caring towards the MC he never had before in this life or the one before, -His Gu Aunite is a parental figure who loves him unconditionally, which he never experienced before. -The first woman he slept with showed him how it feels to be loved by a woman in a romantic sense that has never happened before. The more women he comes to love the more I see him maturing into a powerhouse that comes to embrace the world to protect them all. -These are just a few nonetheless it illustrates how much development the MC has gone through up till now. WORLD BACKGROUND: -As I said before the introduction to higher worlds expands the development leaning towards a richer story. His current world has much to explore for the next couple hundred chapters. I'm curious about the various occupations, heroes, villains, legends, etc that make this story a fuller read. Would I recommend this book? Yes! Do give it a go.

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