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Mark87tony
Mark87tonyLv23yr
2021-04-24 11:50

Du Chan will become a legendary character, the world will remember. The story and character design is good although there are a few typos I hope the author corrects it. BTW is this a Chinese translated novel or an original work?

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ChanduGod
ChanduGodAuthor

Yeah this novel is my original work

VoidZ
VoidZLv14

I hope its not a huge harem because those mess up good novels

ChanduGod:Yeah this novel is my original work
Lonely_Old_Daoist
Lonely_Old_DaoistLv1

Tag says harem…

VoidZ:I hope its not a huge harem because those mess up good novels
Dragonwingz
DragonwingzLv3

There are stories with great big harems. It's just a difficult thing to do.

VoidZ:I hope its not a huge harem because those mess up good novels
Yunoo_Qtt
Yunoo_QttLv1

Trash novel

ChanduGod:Yeah this novel is my original work
ChanduGod
ChanduGodAuthor

okay...

Yunoo_Qtt:Trash novel
Legendary_Gear5
Legendary_Gear5Lv13

I mean tbf grasping evil has harem in the hundreds of thousands and i can still remember all of the named ones lol that novel is a work of art btw

Dragonwingz:There are stories with great big harems. It's just a difficult thing to do.
OverkillBills
OverkillBillsLv5

whats it called

Legendary_Gear5:I mean tbf grasping evil has harem in the hundreds of thousands and i can still remember all of the named ones lol that novel is a work of art btw
Aung_Kaung_Myat_4789
Aung_Kaung_Myat_4789Lv3

enlighten me senior

Dragonwingz:There are stories with great big harems. It's just a difficult thing to do.
Ryu_Hayabusa_8610
Ryu_Hayabusa_8610Lv1

there is nothing wrong with big harem We are okay As long as MC pays enough attention to his girls

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TheAmbrosius
TheAmbrosiusLv15

INITIAL THOUGHTS: -Normally I don't write a review before 100 chapters however, this novel in my opinion has reached a threshold to be reviewed. So without further ado... WRITING QUALITY: -Out of 5 I gave this a 3. That means pretty good with room to improve. Readable enough to where I'll continue reading however, I notice the errors enough impacting my quality of reading. Hopefully, over time the author improves his English proficiency for a better quality novel. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -This is a bit earlier to say given the less than 100 chapters uploaded. That being said it's reached the initial threshold of 40+, unlike some authors who stop around there. STORY DEVELOPMENT -This novel just like most novels tells us there is a higher world/ realm for the MC to explore once he reached a certain threshold in cultivation. I got no problem with this since it expands how far the plot can go. -The MC is at his first place of major growth showing many future plots on the horizon. I find this to be great as it satisfies the present plus links future plot points ahead. -Overall well done. CHARACTER DESIGN -This section and world background are by far the most developed so far. -The MC is starting this his original personality from his past life while getting influenced by his present experiences. He has shown based on the techniques he's found and powerhouses he's come across to have changed the way he views and interacts with his environment which is a plus for me. For his personality, you can see he isn't(in my opinion) Supremely Evil no Righteous when compared to other characters. He's more like an anti-hero. A man that is willing to be cruel to the cruel while treating the innocent with respect assuming they do the same. He's shown to be hostile towards a certain type of sect because of their methods to grow stronger. I'm curious about his stance towards larger picture plots, but that will be left for future chapters. -Side characters have some personality and are integral to the MC development which is good. Some examples... -His best friend shows sincere caring towards the MC he never had before in this life or the one before, -His Gu Aunite is a parental figure who loves him unconditionally, which he never experienced before. -The first woman he slept with showed him how it feels to be loved by a woman in a romantic sense that has never happened before. The more women he comes to love the more I see him maturing into a powerhouse that comes to embrace the world to protect them all. -These are just a few nonetheless it illustrates how much development the MC has gone through up till now. WORLD BACKGROUND: -As I said before the introduction to higher worlds expands the development leaning towards a richer story. His current world has much to explore for the next couple hundred chapters. I'm curious about the various occupations, heroes, villains, legends, etc that make this story a fuller read. Would I recommend this book? Yes! Do give it a go.

MADVILLIAN_47
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