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ChanduGod
ChanduGodAuthor3yr
2021-09-29 23:11

hello guys this is my second review ;) first of all this is my first novel. so don't be disappointed in first few chapters, its getting better and better, as a reader I can tell that too. and i want to tell some things before you guys start reading. 1, MC Du Chan is an dropped out, gangster, and a otaku in his past life on earth, he is a bit childish in the starting chapters because he is in kids body! a 8 years old kid is not an adult! even with his past memories! but everything will change after some chapters. but he is selfish, and evil type MC, you can call it Anti Hero! 2, Story its strong plot and good i guess 3, Harem Yes, its harem! but there are no dumb FL's, MC loves his harem more then anything! but he had no weakness to women! he would kill women too! 4, Grammar my grammar is kinda not bad, you will understand whats happening and whats going on, but it will cause problem to some readers. 5, Updates yes, daily updates! thats enough i think, Thanks for reading this review! please try to read this novel too, Thanks in advance! ;) This novel is not bad!

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Ghost_Playing
Ghost_PlayingLv15

That’s awesome man. Try to be careful how he meets his harem chicks though or else you get one of those cringe moments which don’t fit into the story y'know what I mean? (Btw don’t give him too many woman since if it’s too many then we might not get to see everyone of them very often and other might get priority unintentionally)

Readable
ReadableLv15

Why does the guy in the cover picture look like he is about to slaughter that woman and her daughter.😂

BAMBINO_BAMBINO
BAMBINO_BAMBINOLv4

author please tell me Du Chan will get his body back😭I don't like Bai at all please 🥺 I don't wanna drop the story assure me that Du Chan will get his body back

ChanduGod
ChanduGodAuthor

lol, read the next chapter of it. he gets back

BAMBINO_BAMBINO:author please tell me Du Chan will get his body back😭I don't like Bai at all please 🥺 I don't wanna drop the story assure me that Du Chan will get his body back
Senpai_God
Senpai_GodLv4

So when tf does he stop acting like a kid? I'm at chapter 30 after the village massacre when you said he will start being more mature and emotionless yet nothing seems to have changed, I'd go as far as to say he has become even more childish

CultureSect_Master
CultureSect_MasterLv13

daily updates, huh?

Al_ameen_Ishola
Al_ameen_IsholaLv1

when are you updating the story

ChanduGod
ChanduGodAuthor

I don't know man... tell me, should I continue this? it's been dead for a long time.

Al_ameen_Ishola:when are you updating the story
Sorax_asura
Sorax_asuraLv15

Hi, I have just started it but it have a good start and can becomes something interesting so please continue it.[img=recommend]

ChanduGod:I don't know man... tell me, should I continue this? it's been dead for a long time.
Aswathkb
AswathkbLv13

Story is interesting.Please continue writing

ChanduGod:I don't know man... tell me, should I continue this? it's been dead for a long time.
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TheAmbrosius
TheAmbrosiusLv15

INITIAL THOUGHTS: -Normally I don't write a review before 100 chapters however, this novel in my opinion has reached a threshold to be reviewed. So without further ado... WRITING QUALITY: -Out of 5 I gave this a 3. That means pretty good with room to improve. Readable enough to where I'll continue reading however, I notice the errors enough impacting my quality of reading. Hopefully, over time the author improves his English proficiency for a better quality novel. STABILITY OF UPDATES: -This is a bit earlier to say given the less than 100 chapters uploaded. That being said it's reached the initial threshold of 40+, unlike some authors who stop around there. STORY DEVELOPMENT -This novel just like most novels tells us there is a higher world/ realm for the MC to explore once he reached a certain threshold in cultivation. I got no problem with this since it expands how far the plot can go. -The MC is at his first place of major growth showing many future plots on the horizon. I find this to be great as it satisfies the present plus links future plot points ahead. -Overall well done. CHARACTER DESIGN -This section and world background are by far the most developed so far. -The MC is starting this his original personality from his past life while getting influenced by his present experiences. He has shown based on the techniques he's found and powerhouses he's come across to have changed the way he views and interacts with his environment which is a plus for me. For his personality, you can see he isn't(in my opinion) Supremely Evil no Righteous when compared to other characters. He's more like an anti-hero. A man that is willing to be cruel to the cruel while treating the innocent with respect assuming they do the same. He's shown to be hostile towards a certain type of sect because of their methods to grow stronger. I'm curious about his stance towards larger picture plots, but that will be left for future chapters. -Side characters have some personality and are integral to the MC development which is good. Some examples... -His best friend shows sincere caring towards the MC he never had before in this life or the one before, -His Gu Aunite is a parental figure who loves him unconditionally, which he never experienced before. -The first woman he slept with showed him how it feels to be loved by a woman in a romantic sense that has never happened before. The more women he comes to love the more I see him maturing into a powerhouse that comes to embrace the world to protect them all. -These are just a few nonetheless it illustrates how much development the MC has gone through up till now. WORLD BACKGROUND: -As I said before the introduction to higher worlds expands the development leaning towards a richer story. His current world has much to explore for the next couple hundred chapters. I'm curious about the various occupations, heroes, villains, legends, etc that make this story a fuller read. Would I recommend this book? Yes! Do give it a go.

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