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Exciting Life in DXD

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A boy is killed by a god by mistake, and the said God gives him a chance to live a second life in an anime world of choice with three wishes, in a try to hide his mistake of killing an innocent from his wife. The Book Cover is not mine, I am just using it, the original creators or someone else posted it on Pinterest.

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GreedyNoble
GreedyNobleLv4GreedyNoble

It seems to be decent and has a lot of potential but if I have one thing, it woild be I feel like his growth should be a bit slow at the start then have a increase in growth as he grows

Devil023
Devil023Lv4Devil023

This Fan fic has a Good base plot BUT the story progression is really disappointing. 1 There is no info how did he got system points and also he had skills and gain again in later chapters like SAGE skill, also in the beginning he had 19 skill points but spend 25 skill points and still left 10+ skill points. 2. He created servants and maids using shadow army but author forget the difference between living beings and shadow. 3. Cleria and Ddraig love is like you just need to meet him once and later you will be in love with MC. 4. He was just 4 year old in the start and you just make him a Training Maniac. 5. The progress of his status and abilities gaining is not understandable. you just write how he gained abilities but never show the process of it properly. 6. It makes readers skip to read interesting part because There is so less conversation and more and more MONOLOGUE type narration and you skipping the fun of struggling of gaining abilities and his daily life. 7. He is with Irina and his family but you just completed it in just few paragraphs. where you can write it a full chapter.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

more chapter xD. **********************************************************************************************************************************************************

No_friends_
No_friends_Lv4No_friends_

it is share your system at work day like let's give people who will back stab me a system with all the functions except one that is a betrayal waiting to happen

DontCallMeSimp
DontCallMeSimpLv3DontCallMeSimp

XP

Fenrirzero999
Fenrirzero999Lv13Fenrirzero999

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C0DA
C0DALv2C0DA

If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems

aries_sama
aries_samaLv4aries_sama

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Moon_Light_1126
Moon_Light_1126作者Moon_Light_1126

A Review from the author himself. I trying my best to make it enjoyable as much as I can.[img=recommend] Support me by writing more reviews.

Griffin138
Griffin138Lv4Griffin138

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ghostensaop
ghostensaopLv13ghostensaop

Nice

No_friends_
No_friends_Lv4No_friends_

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