It seems to be decent and has a lot of potential but if I have one thing, it woild be I feel like his growth should be a bit slow at the start then have a increase in growth as he grows
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贊Moon_Light_1126:Okay, I will do it. I have also realized that but it will happen after chapter 35 as I have already written uptill then.