Cultivating Immortality With a Broken Pagoda

it's really good and interesting, more updates

Love me a good eastern novel. I like where the book is headed, it’s obvious you have a good idea about the future of your story. Nice writing too, good descriptions and dialogue. My only critique is that it’s very slow in the beginning, I wish you had begun with the pagoda opening instead of the awkward two year training/breakfast montage.

This is an interesting story. It takes it’s time to build the world and characters and actually does a good job in doing so. The premise makes you curious for what is to come next. I for one really like the writing style and the slow but steady pace of this novel. The family aspect is also one of it’s big pluses for me as way too often in cultivation the family is abandoned or just totally left behind. I find it refreshing how the main character not only truelly seems to care for his family but also interacts with them on a daily basis and actually participates in family life. If there is one thing lacking in this novel it is the update speed. Maybe we as readers should give Author San some more motivation by leaving our reviews and show our support for their novel. So here goes: you can do it Author San! You are doing a great job so please keep writing! 😊💪