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LeezertjeLv147mth
2024-09-22 04:18

This is an interesting story. It takes it’s time to build the world and characters and actually does a good job in doing so. The premise makes you curious for what is to come next. I for one really like the writing style and the slow but steady pace of this novel. The family aspect is also one of it’s big pluses for me as way too often in cultivation the family is abandoned or just totally left behind. I find it refreshing how the main character not only truelly seems to care for his family but also interacts with them on a daily basis and actually participates in family life. If there is one thing lacking in this novel it is the update speed. Maybe we as readers should give Author San some more motivation by leaving our reviews and show our support for their novel. So here goes: you can do it Author San! You are doing a great job so please keep writing! 😊💪

Cultivating Immortality With a Broken Pagoda

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Thank you very much! This means a lot to me. I have been dealing with some issues in real life, so I have been unable to update over the past week. I might or might not update tomorrow, but the updates will certainly become normal from the day after tomorrow.

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You are welcome 😊. If I didn’t truelly like the story I wouldn’t post a review. So just know that it is good and liked. (At least by me). Take your time in real life. Just don’t give up on writing 😁 I will be waiting for your updates as I have added your book to my library. ❤️

pinaka_:Thank you very much! This means a lot to me. I have been dealing with some issues in real life, so I have been unable to update over the past week. I might or might not update tomorrow, but the updates will certainly become normal from the day after tomorrow.
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