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A New World, an immersive game experience

作者: Breuno
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A full dive VR game has been released, A New World. While it is not the only VR game in the world, this one has one advantage over others: Being able to play it even while sleeping. Like one would think, many people jumped to try and claim the first headsets. Mostly gamers, but some other types of people too. Our MC, Eldrian, is naturally a gamer who could not wait but to try it. Quickly he and everyone else who bought the headsets found themselves in a world, not just a game. While realism is nice and all, the amount they were given was just too much... Players started taking emotional tolls from playing the game, and when the company made a shocking announcement. This was amplified. -------------------------- Chapter Length: 1500-2000 words (Chapters 1-390ish) Chapter Length: 1200-1400 words (Chapters 390-?) --------------------------

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Chapter 1Prologue: A New World is Release

'Finally... Finally, the beta is out. I can't wait! I still remember the trailer from 3 months ago,' Eldrian thought as he excitedly waited for the delivery in his apartment.

The trailer scene released by Miracle Corporation had been truly different.

Instead of focusing on gameplay, the trailer showed a siege. Normal trailers would have a showcase of gameplay. Here, the focus was entirely on the world and NPCs. Perhaps calling it a trailer focused on lore would be apt. 

And certainly, a massive talking point was the breathtaking graphics. There were even arguments that, thanks to the presence of magic in this world, the city and landscape looked even better than reality. Limited only by the poor quality of our monitors to an acceptable quality.

From a bird's-eye view, the trailer started. Showing the entire city and the actions of everyone preparing for the siege. We moved closer, slowly. In what can only be described as a curious bird flying closer to inspect the strange actions of humans. 

Flashes of light occasionally appeared from the strange magical towers. Standing proudly behind the tall whitewashed walls of the city. 

On these walls, soldiers scrambled about like ants. Readying this and that, a constant bustle. Contrary, the city streets were empty but for the occasional rushing soldier.

A deathly silence filled the city, but for these occasional movements of soldiers. A silence filled with tension as many cowered in their homes and prayed for their family -who at least had some fighting experience, be it military or adventure- on the walls. 

The scene continued to move, slowly leaving the walls and entering the city. The trailer did not rush, before it had only shown us the silence. Now it had us experience it. 

A silence filled with tension. The silence before war. Only interrupted by the occasional clatter of metal from the soldiers still moving to their station. These brief sounds added even more to the unnatural tension in the city. 

Next, our view rushed up high and flew around the city. Giving us time to take it all in, at a height allowing us to see the neighborhoods, but not the entire city. 

It was truly a massive city. Truly fantasy in scale. Its size would make little sense in medieval times, probably only possible thanks to the presence of magic. 

In time, the strange pattern of the city became clear as our view increased more and more in height. A top-down view showed how the city seemed to have been made in some sort of array. Like a piece of art with each house and road planned before being built. 

Of the magic releasing towers, there were eight. Equally distanced from each other and forming a circle around the inner city. Clearly strategically placed, perhaps even for something magical. It looked like the city itself formed some sort of massive magical array.

As for the towers, the lack of technology was clear in them, their architecture shoddy at best. Yet somehow they stood tall and strong. The flashes of light adding to their majesty. 

Along with the tall walls, they created a truly imposing sight.

Moments later, the viewpoint changed again. Instead of a bird's-eye view, it was now from the perspective of a member of some council. The room was dimly lit, alluding to the depressing mood filling it.

The council, two females and two males, stood in silence for a moment as they tried to sort out their own thoughts. 

One woman wore a full set of plate armor, making her look far more imposing than she would have in normal clothing. The other wore a beautiful blue and white robe. Yet, for some reason, this robe exuded grace and strength.

On the men's side, one seemed truly exhausted. His clothes were torn and pieces of his leather armor was missing, as if he just barely survived an attack. Shockingly, even with his attire in tatters, no visible cuts or fresh blood was seen. The only sign of wounds being the tattered attire and the dried blood staining what was left. 

The last person was someone you feel you can just forget. Eldrian couldn't even remember this man's features. Be it what he wore or how he looked.

"But Princess Ariella, we cannot repel them. Many of our strongest have gone to the central lands. The same is true of all other nearby kingdoms. Everyone went to discuss how we can fight back against the monster invasion. Leaving us with no means of surviving till they might find an answer." The man in tattered armor said.

The princess sighed as she, too, hated the timing of the attack. Just a week later, and it would not have been so bad. "I don't know, Vardic... We have to try. If Ariel falls, then the kingdom won't be far behind. We must do our best to hold out."

"While that is true... We must try to ensure casualties are minimized. Why don't we evacuate?" Asked the mysterious man.

"It's already too late," Ariella sighed again, wondering just how they had missed such a massive army. Naturally, the reason was obvious: their scouts had been found and killed without even managing a distress signal. 

"I am afraid the most we can do is try to increase their casualties." Said the woman in the full plate armor.

Silence fell again, as everyone knew that this was indeed the case. The strength of the monsters was far too much for them to handle. Even if they still had their missing commanders here, the chances would have been slim.

In this silent moment, the view changed again. This time zooming past the city to the surrounding area. From this vantage point, a massive black mass could be seen advancing in the city's direction.

As the viewpoint neared to black mass, Eldrian could make out more of what the mass was composed of. Many beastlike monsters were in this mass. They looked mostly like mutated wolves, some even pleasing to the eye. Yet they all had one thing in common: they had an air of ferocity surrounding them.

Behind these beasts was a more traditional styled army. Except that this army was mostly compromised out of orcs.

The orcs did not look hideous, rather they looked barbaric but humanoid. Most of them had close to no armor, or even clothing. The females present didn't even bother to cover their chests unless they wore breastplates. Certainly one reason the trailer had had an age restriction.

The orcs marched in a semi-orderly manner, as if they were part of a well-trained group. At certain places in this orderly army, chaos reigned. As soon as Eldrian's eyes were pulled to these places, he saw some truly massive creatures. With a height of almost six meters (20ft), the closest description Eldrian could give them was that of trolls or giants.

This chaotic black mass and the orderly army marched towards the city in a strange kind of balance. Chaos in front and order behind.

After a suspense-filled minute or two, during which the view changed from the frantic soldiers on the walls to the citizens praying in their homes, the siege finally began. The beasts charged crazily at the massive walls.

Soon after they started their charge, commands filled the air. Ordering the soldiers on what to do. Most of whom were thrust into the situation after simply having been given a weapon and told how to thrust out with it. 

Hearing the screams, the soldiers jumped into action unorderly. The veterans all taking control of a small batch of newbies and somehow making things work. Ballista bolts filled the air, followed by massive stones. 

Every bolt would reap the lives of at least three beasts. The stones flung from the trebuchets' claimed even more, leaving a line of mangled bodies. But this did little in stopping the beasts. Rather, the smell of blood sent them into a frenzy. Making them seem even more vicious.

Just seconds after the first siege machines attacked, another type of defense joined the fray. Massive spears of ice formed before those strange magic towers. Each the size of an adult man.

The spears flew from the tower in rotation. The first to fire, firing again after the last. Making the duration during which there was no spears of ice nonexistent.

The destruction and damage of these attacks were immense. Craters of over a meter forming after each hit as the ice shattered and spread. Unfortunately, this did not stop the frenzied charge of beasts. Soon they reached the range where normal archers and mages could release their attack.

A massive wave of arrows sailed through the air. Its effects were simply amazing. The monster mass seemingly stopped for a few seconds. Not due to them becoming scared, but rather the number of monsters that died to the arrows.

But after this first wave of arrows, the next came too slowly and the monsters quickly started scaling the walls with their claws, digging them deep into the stone with every move. When the beasts had reached about halfway up, the soldiers started pouring oil down.

Shortly after, some men in robes chanted a bit before launching fireballs into the mass of monsters coated in oil. This caused a massive blaze of heat to assault both the defenders and attackers.

Regrettably, even this did little to decrease the beasts' numbers.

"Princess Ariella, we have to retreat. While we might be able to fight to a standstill for a few more hours. I can guarantee that our arrows will run out in those few hours, after which the orc army will make their move. We cannot allow our citizens to end up in their hands!" Vardic almost screamed the last part, the trauma of such victims' situation still haunting him.

"I know you are right, Vardic, yet... I do not wish to condemn my people to death. Is there really no way we can change the outcome?" Princess Ariella asked, her voice cracking as she tried not to cry. She knew that all of her people living in Ariel will die today. At the very least, she should offer them this. Being taken captive would bring them misery with no bounds.

"The situation is too dire. We have to retreat soon or we won't be able," Jake said as he kept looking out of a window. Soon he saw the monsters reaching the top of the walls.

"I understand. We will go now. Gather the Hippogriff-guards. We will leave as soon as the magic towers activate Eternal Freeze. Hopefully, this way we can spare the citizens of our capital from suffering, and take out most of those darn beasts!" Princess Ariella said as her eyes showed her resolve.

'The very least I can do is ensure that they die painlessly,' she whispered to herself. The viewers could only hear this because the scene had zoomed onto the princess's face, showcasing her grief and her powerful will.

"Yes." The others answered immediately, exiting the room to go give out the commands. Eternal Freeze was a forbidden spell only intended to be used if victory was impossible. It would turn the magic towers into output devices without limiters.

Coupled with the city array and core, this would cause a massive freeze blast. Killing all the city inhabitants and making the city a frozen hell with temperatures below a hundred kelvin for a few days after.

Because of the city core being part of this spell, the city might stay at this temperature for far longer. Month or years being a possibility.

Less than a minute after the towers stopped firing, an aura of frost was released. This aura fell slowly from the tower, creating soft white mist as it traveled. Spreading increasingly faster as time went by.

As the monsters saw this aura, they started panicking and stampeding away from the city, with many of them dying in the chaos. Only the faster monsters avoided the frost aura.

As this aura was descending, a group of 15 hippogriffs and their riders also flew into the sky from the center of the city.

After the activation of this spell, a last scene of the town was shown, and the audience was then given an incredibly sad scene. The soldiers started crying, some hugging their battle-sworn brothers. The citizens hugged their family, with fathers crying, yet relief on their faces.

They all knew what the frost mist signified.

It was a sign that the city was deemed lost. In order to damage the enemy and give all citizens a peaceful death, their city's forbidden spell had been used.

And within a few seconds of the aura reaching them, completely freezing them in the blink of an eye. Just five minutes after the spell's activation, all that could be seen was a beautiful city of ice.

The city now looked like a piece of art made out of crystalized water. An art piece showing the middle of a war. The citizens hugging their loved ones. Looking as if they were praying that the soldiers will repel the enemy, or celebrating a successful defense.

The soldiers crying and hugging each other on the walls in what almost looked like celebration. If not for the tears staining their faces.

Further on, the frozen retreating monsters could be seen. Making it possible to mistake that the soldiers were truly celebrating their victory, instead of trying to come to grips with their defeat.

Only the orc army was left unaffected. As if they had predicted that this might happen.

This was the trailer that everyone was shown. Not only was it very controversial. As it showed the good side being defeated. But it also depicted the emotions of the citizens so well, all the viewers had felt sad after the ending.

"How was this a trailer and not a tragic movie?" Many of them had thought. This entire trailer was just short of 30 minutes. But the impact the viewers felt was massive. Everyone asked why this was shown. The response from the game creators, Miracle Corporation, was even more astonishing.

"This was not a staged event or recreation. But rather how the game really runs. We have been simulating the game in this state for the past six months. We had some alpha testers join the game to test the deep dive technology and how they felt after going to sleep via the headset. They have not played the game all that much, only testing if everything worked from a technical standpoint."

"The true game test was six months of simulations with only the NPCs in the world."

"From the time the program started, we witness the NPCs growing far more than we expected. Soon, cases like these started because of the event of a monster invasion. They even started preparing to make an alliance. We chose this scene since it happened only a mere two weeks ago."

"'Why did we choose this scene?' you asked. The answer is simple. It shows best how realistic and sad this game can become. How insignificant the weak are to change their fate, and how the strong could control an entire city's death."

"But most importantly, the emotions the NPCs showed. We hope to let everyone know that A New World [ANW] will be different from all other VR games. The NPCs feel, they think, they will do their best to survive just like players."

That was the day on which Eldrian swore to himself that he must play A New World. The world looked so vivid. The events were too impactful to even be thought of as a game. This is why he was so excited.

Finally, they were releasing their personalized headset. This headset has been optimized for A New World, and while you could access it via the older models. This headset had an edge that all people craved.

The ability to play the game as you slept.

The concepts were you would enter the game as if you are experiencing a vivid dream. You would have full control of yourself, being able to do what you want in the game. Be it working, learning, or just playing the game.

The reason everyone craved this was that on average this would give everyone an extra 8 hours to spend as they want, every day. Giving people around half a day extra, seeing as normally one would be awake for 16 hours.

Of course, due to this function, the headset was not cheap. Eldrian had to save his money for a very long time. In fact, because of the trailer only being three months before release, he had to take a job to make the money on time.

Luckily, he was always a person who saved his money rather than spending it as if it was just water. Thus, in only two months of working as a waiter, with his normal savings, he earned the extra 500 dollars he needed to afford the headset. The total cost was 5000 dollars.

Eldrian was now eagerly waiting for the delivery to arrive.

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目錄
1 :volume 1: Welcome to ANW
2 :Volume 2: Adventure
3 :Volume 3: Nobility
4 :Volume 4: Fighting Back
5 :Volume 5: Siege continues
6 :Volume 6: New adventure
7 :Volume 7 — Aiming for Divinity

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Grifdacier
GrifdacierLv4

Hello there 👋 ( be aware this review contain some slight spoiler but no major ) Okay so normally, I don’t write review very often, it’s my first to be exact Why could you expect from this book ? Pros : World backgroung : -Your typical western fantasy world with goblin, dwarfs, elves, but with many different races in the same species ( moon elves, sun elves, wood elves... ) Also the map is massive with tons of empire containig even more kingdom, at a point I loose myself sometimes. The lore of the world has not been fully explored but it will come in time... Character development : -First our MC is one of the most human like I’ve ever read, he has anger, embarrassment and all the emotions which define who we are. He is also a lamba human, not some son of mafia gang and all. He will passe several ordeals which will make him mature and affirm his will as well as his goal. He is a 19 man, little bit introvert and clueless in relationships but definitely not your typical nerd who is more dense than mercury. He will open more to others with the game and even through there is no romance until now, there is one main ship which is only waiting to sail. Story development : -*Spoiler* Our MC arrive in a world where a beast tide is about to rase every empire, estimed in the next couple of years if not months, so it’s a rush to becoming strong with a player community completely disorganised. * End of Spoiler* Character design : -There are several others side characters well made, they didn’t feel bland like i’ve seen in some other novel. *Spoiler* Some will die, some will lives, and the despair of the MC will be fully felt.* End of Spoiler* Plot armour : ( what i’m considering plot armour is heaven sent opportunity, like he has nothing to do. Because he will have oppotunity but at a cost he is not willing to shoulder if he was to have a redo) -There is little to no plot armor in this story, the first one will be he met a powerful guy ( at the start ) but this guy will train him like a normal soldier, not like a family heirloom and giving him all the secret techniques he don’t even has. The guy is powerful but only in the city he is. Also the path of the MC will not be a smooth one *Spoiler* , he will choose a very difficult race which magic is blocked so he will experiment many way to unseal it, also he will use every advantage his race talent give him, so if you kinda like jack of all trades it’s for you. Also regarding how he can use magic, he will not have the final solution from the beginning, he will experiment many different way, some wrong, some half-wrong and he is still not accustomed to his final form Also with these experiment, he will become quite special, not overpowered but he has the potential to be* End of spoiler*. Cons : -The pacing of the novel may be boring for some people, it’s a day to day pacing with IRL elements ( not massive but good enough to understand he is not only playing). Also,he will not become OP in tens of chapter. I’m currently at chapter 196 and he is still at the bottom of the barrel, just slightly stonger than normal player and normal soldier. Also the strength mesurement can be quit confusing for beast and human alike: There is your typical level which you gain by killing ennmies and it give you stat. There is also the job (like swordsman and magician) wich are in Tier ( from 1 to 10, each more difficult to pass with a qualitative change at Tier 5) it also give stats And beast have an other factor( player also has it if they choose a difficult race, powerful advantage but the sytem give no help ), the strength of their body : normal animal->magical beast->demonic beast->bloodline beast->ancient beast-> mythical beast So you have to understand strength is like : body strength*job*level with each less important tha the other : body strength>job>level for example a human tier 7 mage level 50 will be completely destroy by a mythical beast Tier 4 level 30 ( also beast don’t have job just tier) ( maybe not but i’m giving an example ) And finnaly the biggest problem this novel has for me is..... NOT ENOUGH CHAPTERS 🤬😡 (Even through the chapter are really lenghty)

c_novel
c_novelLv11

In short, this novel follows a in the beginning mostly average person in his adventure into the VR-game A New World (ANW). The story includes several deep topics, from AI over what is life to psychological topics. It also has a slow progress in the overarching story progression. Many different things happen and there is a good mix of action, adventure and training both in-game and out-of-game with an in-depth magic system. The MC does really not get any rest. ––– detailed with mild spoilers ––– Writing Quality: Some minor errors which do not hamper comprehension. Action scenes are exciting and even the complex topics are understandable (if you do not rush read through the chapters). Story Development: The MC and the whole story makes slow but constant progress, which I find a much more realistic flow for a VR Novel. There was only one big timeskip in about 500 chapters, but I did not miss any. Where would they come from? Games are designed to be exciting and the MC does more than what the average player would. This novel also developes the real life story, which is rare. Real life does not stop just because there is an in-game event and it is the same the other way arround. The different encounters and events/quest are always exciting and the whole feel of the VR-Game which is too real for what a game is supposed to be is integrated well. New storylines are always introduced in a sensible way and up till now none of them were abandoned. Character Design: All characters have depth to them but backgrounds are not just dumped on the reader and thus only told, when a character asks or feels the need to give info. This means, that the reader has to think about how characters act and interact to get a comprehensive picture of the characters. Update Stability: Very good. One to two chapters a day with even length. Small pauses only when significant problems occur. Direct reader interaction from small backlog. World Background: The most realistic VR novel I have seen. Both real life and the game world are resonable and thought out. Cool and interesting magic system which does require thinking by the reader and rereading of past chapters after long pauses in reading. Compared to go "Mages are too op": Magic system keeps this detailed description which was only present in the early chapters of MATO. 500 chapters in this novel might be about at 100 chapters of MATO by developement of MC.

Breuno
Breuno作者

Hello everyone: I thought it might be around time for me to do a new review of my story as it has developed far more and become so much more than I ever originally thought/imagined. (Especially being constantly in the top 100-150 was not something I ever imagined) Let's start with a, not sure what to call it. You will realize that my first few chapters have quite a few cliches or tropes. I will admit I relied on them to get started, slowly I moved away and now I harshly look at cliches and will really debate if I wish to add any or not.  If I do decide to do so, I will always attempt to do it in a way that will fit naturally in the world and story.  On that topic, this story is not a quick one diving into a plot and having the main character have a strong goal right from the start. Eldrian is just a person who was interested in this new type of game, and naturally he is our MC because he has some natural unknown talents. (You wouldn't want to follow an average joe, or would you?) He is not OP, he is not weak. Rather, he is. He grows with time and he learns with time. He forgets often and he does stupid and brilliant things almost at the same time. He is human, and I do my best to reflect that he is. I do my best to reflect this with all my characters, even the non-humans. Next, the story idea. It started as a more realistic game world, and become an 'alternate' world instead. It is most certainly still a game story and the world is indeed virtual and a game, but I do not focus on game elements. They are there, there are stats, there are weapons, spells, and item descriptions.  In the heat of combat, they are not brought onto the page. However, I do not neglect them. I always run my spreadsheets and do calculations to determine what effects what spell/attack will have. The stats are important, but I feel pushing them into a fight is distracting. So I almost never do, barring a few unique enemies who do not possess normal vitals.  This brings me to my magic system, I get that many feel it is similar to Mages are too OP. However, I started my story before reading that one, and I was at around chapter 30 when MTOP(?) reached chapter 100; when I started reading it.  I won't mention it more than this, but I want to make it clear that while it might feel(read) the same, mine is nowhere close. You should realize this after (not sure) chapter 50 maybe, chapter 100 for sure. Magic is hard, and it stays that way constantly. It is a constant pursuit of new and difficult knowledge and skills. Nothing comes easy, everything takes time and effort.  On that note, much of my writing dives into these topics in detail. I do not glance at details, but I also do my best to never repeat details. One spell might take one, two, maybe even three or more chapters to learn, but the next spell won't take more than a paragraph unless it is very different.  With this said, I also want to mention that the IRL world is constantly intertwined with the story. It is not forgotten, and it is part of the lore and background. After all, ANW was created with a very specific aim, and that aim is one a company in the real world has.  Next, a few things I see are often asked/questioned.  Romance: Some, but not really. I have introduced a romance early on, but I never really developed it as I am a stranger to the topic of romance.  (NTR, Harem): No on both Rewriting earlier chapters: I simply do not have the time nor will that really work, I have however gone through and fixed the obvious spelling and grammar mistakes.  Pacing: It is slow, I won't lie. As I said earlier, I go into details and things are constantly happening. There is almost no time skips. By chapter 500 only 6 months have passed, Eldrian is around level 30 (won't give precise level) and Tier 4.  However, levels do work differently in this game compared to normal worlds. The death penalty you will also find is really harsh, and my story is not one where the MC somehow never dies. (never made much sense to me, especially since dying in a game is normal for everyone) ------- Side note: I dive deeply into topics such as the emotional impact of events, philosophy, and realism. My aim with my magic system is and has always been to bridge reality and fantasy in a 'fantastical' way.  You will come to find with time the approach I took for this, I hope you come to love it as I do. If not, I understand.  ------- I think this is a long enough overview (almost a chapter's length), hopefully, it can help people decide if they want to give it a try or not. 

BookWorm313
BookWorm313Lv13

As of chapter 47 Writing Quality: 4/5 Some spelling and grammer mistakes throughout the story. However this does not spoil the story and can be easily understood despite the minor mistakes. Story Development: 5/5 Despite only being 47 chapters so far, the story development is interesting. The fact that the author plays the role of VR extremely prominently is nice, but it would be more interesting if the MC backstory was shown as well. The battle scenes are done really well in this novel. The fact that the intro of the game (trailer) gave the storyline a strong foothold is interesting as other authors tend to not use such things. This is very unique to this story so i give the author props for implementing this unique dynamic. Character Design: 4/5 This takes into account that the novel is only 47 chapters long so far. There is little background information on the MC. How well to do his family is, etc. (there is some information but not alot). The side characters are not really evident at this point besides the female lead (potential love interest). Only some names are being thrown around here and there without any interesting or distinct facts about them. Updating Stability: 5/5 I do not know the stability of the update as I read all 47 chapters in a day. I just place 5/5 as I consider it stable until further notice. World Background: 5/5 The trialer of the game provided a good base for the VR world background. This is done better than most other novels. However, since this is a relatively new novel, there is a lot of room for world background expansion. I hooe the author can continue on this path as the expanaion of the world's background is exoanding at a nice pace. Overall: 4.6/5 The story is really interesting and one that I will continue to follow. This is one of the better newer novels on this site. I think people should pick this up to read at least until this point. The MC can be considered overpowered in some manner (compared to other players), but the content is still really interesting. Hope the author continues to work hard on this novel 👍

Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv14

There are a couple of things that don't make sense... the mc shouldn't be that fat... He bikes to university every day and because he is at university he wouldn't spend anything on takeouts or tons of junk food to save money. It was also mentioned he didn't spend money like water and always saved what he earned. Boosting the fact that this makes little sense... To me, it just feels like you made him like that as a joke to try and make it funny. Leading to this being extremely forced... I'm not trying to hate, I'm just stating the fact that it just doesn't make sense giving the background you bought him upon. I also feel like him being a "chubby" elf is going to be a reoccurring joke throughout until he slims down from the training. For me, this is just going to annoy tf outta me as I will always think back to this and how it was forced anyway leading to all mentions of it just annoying me more each time. If that makes sense? I hope this doesn't happen constantly with the forced try at humour as it would be extremely disappointing. If you want humour it will flow naturally in the story. There is no need to force it as it will just bring down the story as a whole. Oh, another thing is his chosen name. Like wtf? Who cares what it means in Chinese? He is an elf... chose an elf name. His own name Eldrian? Is more fcking elfy than Haru... If he was a human I wouldn't mind him having the name Haru but he is not. He is an elf... It's like the mc is a dragon and calling it Haru. It doesn't fit at all. The immersive feel of the book is again compromised by doing this. I am assuming the Author is chinses? Again this is not hate so don't take it as that. It's just you are writing about an elf so why give it a human name? That sort of thing. So far it isn't looking like a great book but I haven't read a lot yet. I will read further and change the review depending on how it reads later.

Awesome_Sauce_9607
Awesome_Sauce_9607Lv3

Up to: Chapter 470 This is, by far, one of the best-written novels on this site, and it’s hard for me to find things I dislike about it, excluding two decisions Eldrian made that I found highly disagreeable, but I won’t go over that since I don’t want to dissuade you from trying this amazing novel for yourself and it’s not a huge deal at the end of the day. The MC is overall very competently written, and has a distinct personality not found in many of the bland OP protagonists that litter the site. Sometimes he messes up, but I prefer it that way as it shows he isn’t a mindless perfection robot. This is doubly so since the author made sure to give him some real, actual flaws that hinder him in ways he doesn’t realize and that the author doesn’t specially highlight. Even if it isn’t especially common that it happens explicity, his flaws are pervasive in all the ways he acts and he acts in character very consistently, though he does change over time. The only other novels on this site I’ve read that share similarly well-written MCs would be Supreme Magus and The Oracle Paths, and it’s a huge breath of fresh air. Other than the MC, the world and magic system in particular is super well thought-out, and most of the time unanswered questions are not left as loose ends. The novel is a bit of a slow burn, but it’s superbly executed; that extra time between improvement isn’t filler, but instead juicy bits of lore, IRL stuff, third-person tidbits, training, and tasks, with only a couple of minor timeskips. We’re almost at 500 chapters, and not even half a year has passed because we’re pretty much following everything Eldrian does in its entirety (again, minus a few time skips). This is a huge plus for me, as I really hate a majority of mid-story time skips even if they’re really well done and a one-time thing like in One Piece. Either way, I strongly recommend that you at least try to trad this hidden gem, I highly doubt you’ll regret it.

Alex_De_Frost
Alex_De_FrostLv1

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